Such heartbreaking dream...

ooo. gosh it was fantastic. now onto the sequal! WOO

This first chapter is very hard to read. It needs a lot of editing. It turned me off to the whole story.

Its a shame that in this moment the dead care more than the (certain) living.

I actually just started and its really good so far. I wanted to comment on the song. It was a great pick and one of my favorites. Thank you.

wow i loved this chapter. i love seeing Rose act like her normal self and have two strogoi be a afraid of her. i like it a lot. i also love how she is being ballsy. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story.

god i love Ivan's point of view he is to funny. he kind of reminds me of Christian and Adrian at the same time. i think you are doing an amazing job with your story so far. i am also falling more and more in love with Ivan. he is my favorite character so far. i can't wait to read more about him. i'm also starting to like Nathan. lol i think Hell has frozen over. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story.

wow i am falling more and more in love with your story. i also love that Yeva and Abe have a good relationship. in a way i hope Dimitri does get a happy ending, but i kind of want Rose to be with someone else. i won't spoil it for other people, but i like this person a lot more than i do Dimitri at the moment. maybe later on in the story i will start to love Dimitri the way i have always loved Dimitri, but i don't know. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story. you are doing an amazing job and i love the flow of your story

i loved this chapter. in a way it made me feel a little guilty for Tasha but not to much. i still don't like her. maybe later on in the story i will like her, but that is highly unlikely. anyways keep up the good work i look forward to reading more of your story

i love Yeva's point of view i think you did an amazing job. i also hate how the queen wanted to kill Rose. if she even tried to kill Rose i would have been so angry. i can't wait to read Yeva talking to Dimitri again. i thought that was so funny. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story

i'm glad Janine is sticking up for Rose so much i am very proud of that. i just wish Rose got to see what her mother was doing for her. i think Rose and her would have a better relationship if she did see what her mother was doing for her. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story and the second story. i am falling more and more in love with your story. i know that i read it before, but i think i read it to fast at the time to really appreciate it.

god i love Janine sticking up for Rose. i wish i got to see more of Janine in the books. i don't know if she shows up a lot in the bloodline series cuz i want to wait until they are all out before i read them all. i also love how Mila is getting her butt kicked i hope Janine does it to Dimitri. i can't remember if they spar. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story

wow that was so out of character of Janine but i loved it. i love hearing Janinie's point of view. i can't wait to read Abe's he has always been one of my favorite characters. i guess i like the bad boys lol. i also can't wait to read when Janine kicks Mila Jones butt. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story

wow i am loving Ivan more and more. he is seeming more and more sweet than Dimitri is. i love how he wants to protect her and doesn't even know why. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story

god i feel so bad for Adrian he always seems to get his heart broken over Rose. i hope he will find his one true love. i love Adrian though he is always there for Rose even when she doesn't want his help. anyways keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of your story.