Reviews for The One You Don't Want to Mess With
laurene32 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
:-) Awesome job! :-) :-)
MsAnnabethJackson chapter 16 . 7/12/2015
this is soooooo nice please do some more
Ivy Wayne chapter 16 . 3/6/2015
Please update soon, I keep rereading this story and it always ends in chapter 16, not chapter2000000000000000000000000
Guest chapter 12 . 2/17/2015
make jon die and jace live
Maddy chapter 4 . 2/15/2015
Where's SEBASTIAN?!
Clace all the way chapter 16 . 2/15/2015
I really hate it when max dies it makes me all depressed and then I realize how awful the world truly is. Wow that was some deep shit, but it's true. I absolutely love your story and I think the way you killed max off was great he untied Jace which help in the end and it made feel like max was.. I mean is a hero.
TaliSimz4 chapter 15 . 2/14/2015
I swear to god ur evil! I'm sitting here with tears staining my pillow! Why?! Please update so I can cry some more at his funeral!
jeez chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
Are you freaking twelve years old? Lmao
Guest chapter 15 . 1/28/2015
Omg wow
Golden herondale chapter 15 . 1/28/2015
Noooooooo, noooooooo, NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO. I DO NOT BELOVE THAT MAX IS DEAD. HE IS NOT DEAD O REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT.
right now I am crying, you are a great writer, update soon.
talya113 chapter 15 . 1/28/2015
PLEASE say this is a trick max can't be dead ...AGAIN!please not AGAIN!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/25/2015
I liked up untill the part where it ended update soon
Guest chapter 14 . 1/24/2015
Omg im dying here i need to know
ismcfiz chapter 14 . 1/25/2015
I love it!
monkeygirl1425 chapter 13 . 12/31/2014
Unexpected but I loved it! Good job I can't wait to read more!
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