So poor lasaaaaaame. I couldn't get past this chapter without being bored.

Ok soooo much shit right now and this chapter's ending makes me want to flame you soooo bad but let me just read one more chapter and if it's shit then i'm dropping

Author:...This story goes deeper and deeper into the dark caverns
Me: Thats what she said

XD

I really hope this story isn't up for deletion (no Cybermen allowed), because this is a very good story. Not a lot of stories i read tend to bring out my emotions (good or bad) but this one did. Which means this story is good, lol, which also means your a good author. It could stay the way it is and just keep adding chapters to it (because I really hate stories that get trashed that are actually good, i feel cheated out, in a way) and wait for when FF gets the problem fixed.

I don't think the Geneva convention gave a flying flip about three pointed blades, they were more into war weapons. stop not translating when you speak another language, that's just rude and straight up a waste of space

ok so, decent first chapter, no really major problems so good job. however, switching perspectives is very annoying, first person by far is the hardest perspective to actually pull off correctly. You didn't do the worst, but it was still not a good idea.
Also, why the Google translate conversations? don't toss Japanese around, it's a break from the story to stare blankly at another language then read the translation right after. just stick to one language, for the most part it's typically only acceptable to use Japanese with technique names.

This is... really badly written.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I hope Naruto fucking kills them

Death of this story

I would like it if you would just use english since you know its easier to read

I apologize for my earlier review thought it still holds much weight. Without spoiling too much I'll just say I'm glad things appear to be turning around and he wasn't an unlikable asshole just for the sake of being one.

I hope you're purposely making this Naruto an unbearable, unlikable asshole in order to change him and make him an actual interesting character in the future. Because as it stands right now. This isn't Naruto and this isn't Kurama. You're Naruto is a whiney brat. He's worse than Naruto in the beginning of the series. Always whining, lashing out, and cursing just because "whoa as me I've suffered and you don't know my pain. Boo hoo"

In my opinion you've made one of the weakest Narutos possible. The reason canon Naruto is so good is because he's physically and, most importantly, emotionally strong. He's suffered hardships that would have broken the average person and instead of succumbing to weakness and turning into an angsty brat like Sasuke and you're oc named Naruto, he faced that negativity head on and inexplicably overcame his negative past and hardships. Don't even get me started on the half demon cliche...

If you're asking yourself "than why his he reading this if he dislikes it so much?" That's just it. I'm TRYING to like it because there are so few Naruto/Teen Titans crossovers, and even fewer where Naruto isn't some edgelord OC anti-hero/villain. The reason I'm trying to stay with this one is at least he isn't a complete anti-hero having allied himself with true heroes, and the fact that you've made his personality so detestable and keep mentioning is background and suffering that I expect you to give him some sort of character arc to (hopefully drastically) change his personality into something more akin to his canon counterpart

inspiration from Hellsing... my life is complete

ONE LAST TIME WAS YOUR FIRST FIC?! What do you know?