Reviews for The First Time |
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anmous chapter 1 . 6/1/2018 nice but you should of continued to show what happens with them afterwards |
Friday Queen chapter 1 . 11/8/2017 So great ! I really love this fic and that's how it could happen between them ! |
Luna del Desierto chapter 1 . 4/27/2017 Thanks for sharing! |
SwiggitieSwootie chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 It's kinda sad to think about what happens after this with Korra being tortured. |
xx myth master xx chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 Angst is the best. Good stuff! |
Sciani chapter 1 . 7/28/2015 Angsty, but lovely at the same time, amazingly written. |
Orionslave chapter 1 . 7/24/2015 Damn...nice work yet again! Would be great to rewrite the next 3 years frm this point :P |
YouWishICare chapter 1 . 5/21/2015 This was beautiful and hearbreaking and sexy all at once. I dont think i can deal with this many emotions at one time. |
Redheadednursey chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 Well that was all kinds of fantastic. |
Insane Magician chapter 1 . 3/4/2015 Okay, great title — I can elaborate on that, just ask You have the word lotus twice and one besides the other Uh, three: please tell me you don't end it here? Otherwise: I'm faving this story and definitely following you |
gaguilar001 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 As soon I read the ending. my mind went to the ending of that episode Korra almost dying ;( Just imagining Asami in the end. I need a tissue box! This was best short fic and I rarely have a tear. |
TacoKing23 chapter 1 . 2/10/2015 This has to be the most emotionally stirring porn I have ever read. Like, I felt things above the waist. It was an interesting experience |
trained2love chapter 1 . 2/6/2015 So that was really good! Any chance for a sequel? This has the potential of being a really long, really emotional story. |
Britmysta chapter 1 . 1/30/2015 Damn girl, that was intense! You've got desperation down to the nines. Great story. - BW |
CanaanAlphardForever chapter 1 . 1/2/2015 My first taste of Korrasami smut and good lord was it fantastic. I'd love more hardcore stuff between these two, but this was just as satisfying. Thank you. |