I must say, this is the best KuramaXHiei I've ever read. I believe you've shown your own anxiety in a way that Hiei would, should someone (*cough* Kurama *cough*) break down his emotional guards. Go you!

Aww, that was so beautiful, this is brilliant :'D

Really I love this story it took me by surprise I was very impreesed with it. Short simple and completely intoxicating it had me clinging to each sentence. If you wrote more I would definitely read!