| Reviews for On Edge |
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   BlowUpKarzahini chapter 11 . 10/1/2015 Hi! This is a pretty great story! I really like Mia as a character, and I can't wait to delve into her family's back story! One thing about the last chapter, though, some words and syllables were in some kind of asian language. It made it kinda hard to read. |
| Tarice the Styraurus chapter 10 . 7/12/2015 Oh, and why exactly doesn't she have a choice!? D: |
| Tarice the Styraurus chapter 8 . 7/12/2015 EW! SHE FELL IN THE SEWER! EW! SO GROSS! DISGUSTING! EW! |
| Tarice the Styraurus chapter 7 . 7/12/2015 :D Can't wait to see Clara meet Mikey! :D |
| Tarice the Styraurus chapter 3 . 7/12/2015 She needs to outright tell the dickwad, Troy, that despite being aesthetically pleasing, she does not want to have any form of relationship with him! :( |
| Tarice the Styraurus chapter 1 . 7/11/2015 5/5 :D |
| CrazynSane chapter 11 . 7/10/2015 woah...did not see that coming...awesome job! |
| TMNTPRO15 chapter 11 . 7/10/2015 Ohhh what going to Happen I gotta know! Update soon! |
| BlackWitchesCat chapter 10 . 5/23/2015 hey new reader here and i must say i like the the story. i usually hate oc stories but you have paced this so well. i love how Mia was not super OP and was actually afraid of raph at first. i like how there is that tension of "shes human i'm not" because it's never really addressed much and raph seems like the perfect one for that type of plot because in canon he is usually the one more down to earth about april and donnies relationship. you have excellent chapter lengths too. also i simply adore mia and clara. i also love how even though you gave her a pretty angsty backstory she isnt totally dripping with it to the point shes just crying "turtles and everyone else please pity me" |
| CrazynSane chapter 1 . 5/21/2015 Liking the story so far |
| CrazynSane chapter 9 . 5/1/2015 this was adorable! l'd definitely say job well done! |
| CrazynSane chapter 8 . 4/27/2015 may not be well 4 them, but it sure adds excitement and suspense to the regular dreary lives of us readers! |
| Blue - The First Traveller chapter 8 . 4/27/2015 Troy is starting to sound more like a creeper than an annoying player. Mia and the gang are in for a ride. And how will Troy, Janie, and the rest react to her guardian April. And I think Mia needs some cheering up, Michelangelo style. |
| WOLFJADE28 chapter 7 . 4/23/2015 I AM TOTALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2015 Way to go! Keep updating, i love your story! -Lisafrank1234576 |
