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the story is very good can't wait for the next chapter. that is if you are still willing to make more

Please update the story is good

Here is a top for you. First stop going into detail on how everyone looks. It eats up a ton of space on the page and really isn't needed. Second, place your author's notes at the end of the chapter, it stops the flow of the story the way you have it now. And third, Sō'unga means Amassing Cloud Fang and is the Sword of the Netherworld. If your going to translate the meaning of words, you need to get it right. Besides those three constructive criticis's, you have a good solid foundation for a good story. I look forward to your continued work.

The avatar for this story looks like it just got done wiping its ass along the ground like some animals do when they have worms. Congratulations on that.

My, things are getting interesting.

I need more

this is so dope . I love it hope that you continue to update

gald to see the story updated again cant wait for more

Please update

Alright, it updated. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Amazing chapter right here.

Loving your story even more now. Keep up the good work.

Nekoshou clan massacre. Sirzech or Zekram bael responsible. So they should pick which clan should be exterminated between Gremory clan or Bael clan.

Perfect and update soon please
Op Naruto

This is good. I like how Naruto interacted with Asia. Wonder how the devil's will react to him once they meet him. Looking forward to reading more