Oh my god, I love it! Great form of writing, a few mistakes, but hey, who's perfect? I do have to say that this is one of the best K.H. fanfics I've read. I hope there's more...there probably is, I've only ever read one fic where it had a bad end, and that was a different game.
You keep updating, I'll keep reading!

Awesome!

I love you for making this fanatic :)