Hahahah. The twist at the end was great, Ranma being female the whole time. It makes sense, though, he does tend to be more emotional that way, and it just might be the push needed to have "him" come out and confess.

Besides, Akane didn't seem to notice either. :D

Cute and nice. I liked it

Wow, usually I hate waffy stuff but that was magnificent.

Tiney

eheehee! what a cute fic! I especially lauged like a maniac at the 'radioactive tomato' part! You could patch up the grammer though. Even Ranma doesn't talk like that!_

"I think maybe tomorrow we'll even work up ta kissin.

I'll probably have to be male for that though..."

YOU MEAN TO TELL ME THAT HE WAS A GIRL WHEN HE SAID I LOVE YOU?1 OMG! if only i could see it..i would die laughing!

sweet. good job!

Ah, I can feel my energy rebalancing!

This was good. Could be better, though. I'm not sure I like the First Person POV, it would have worked better in Third Person. (Not as restricted.) Besides, reading the whole thing in Ranma's slang is a bit tireing.

But all things considered, it made me feel alright. Nice little twist at the end, too.

Love it. I know you probably forgot about it by now but I still had to tell you.

That's just the kind of story that makes you want to go... aw... I love the story! It's so kawaii:)The language was just like Ranma. So... gramatically challenged...but that just makes him cuter! .

Whoa, nice work getting inside Ranma's head. I can almost hear his voice (season 4-7 English version, of course) saying the whole thing. All in all, a short and sweet fic. Not many short fics are good, but yours is a major exception to that rule.

Keep up the great work, and write more! Maybe work on a longer Ranma/Akane story (I love reading those).

Cute story, but it needs a little proofreading. For example: Both of are still smilin like crazy. (you are missing the word "us".)

Best part: radioactive tomato. I don't think I'll be forgetting that one for a while.

AAAAAAAAAAAawwwwwwww!

"I think maybe tomorrow we'll even work up ta kissin.

I'll probably have to be male for that though..."

sequel plz!

I luvvvvv'd it

Lmao! That was sooo good! It was beautiful, I love it!

To be honest, I didn't like it. I don't know why - maybe I'm just tired of all "short little bit of WAFF" being Ranma/Akane, but this fic just seemed rather mundane. Please don't take this as a flame, but as a piece of writeing, it's not bad at all (certainly better than I can do).

-Joshua

Fabulous! I loved it. The end was great, too. "...I'll probably have to male for that though." HA! Stories with good clinchers at the end make for an excellent read. Kudos to you!

Alia-Chan