Oh... Dios, lo ame. Me maravillo la forma en la que expresa el dolor y la impotencia, por qué sí, eran enemigos y al hacer un jutsu como ese deja mucho que pensar. Me encantó la forma en la que dice «lo siento» cuál hoja quemarse, doblarse, romperse o mojarse, porque todo es así, es así.

Beautiful... too angsty for my taste but still beautiful... I do really like how you portrayed their feelings, it's not explicit or bluntly say there is love between or something but we can feel it or rather it's open for any interpretation. The regret clearly felt by them and it's so... Clever! Nice work! Please wrote TobiIzu again!

it's very good, senpai!
i always searching about TobiIzu fanfic, and i got it!
thanks!

This was really good!: )
However, I bet if you polish this gem more, by editing and all that good stuff, the short story would be even better! I really love reading about Izuna and Tobirama. Their relationship was very vague but I've always imagined that it was just like Naruto and Sasuke's, you know? Just in a way more tragic, mature way.
They were on opposite sides of war during extremely tough living condition but I bet that if they met in times of peace, Izuna and Tobirama would have been great friends. (Possibly more if you're into that category idk)
Anyways, really love how you chose to interact these two characters in such a tragic but beautiful way. Makes you wonder if Tobirama created the Edo-Tensei in order to meet Izuna once again and maybe even get his forgiveness.
Once again, this short little story is nice and quite inspiring:)
But a nice story always turns beautiful in its complete and final draft.
Love it;)

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