if everybody can just enter the Gateway it's not a very safe place. Also how come Willow knew exactly which rune she needed to touch to go home. Some things don't make since. She is good but not that good. I also don't like what Buffy has become. She is very arrogant and to me she needs to learn that even when you are stonger, faster and dealt with some things it doesn't give you the right to judge her others self because she isn't as far as she is. Also she didn't answered the question what she could kill Willow if Willow did go bad. Because probably she can't she already had a fit when she died before.
This Buffy couldn't kill Angelus but she did kill Angel for good how hard is that. The other Buffy if she ever did kill willow knew that Willow would come back being a immortal and al. Angel is sent to dead for good.

This story would have been better if you had made it so that Xander was human during the day and a gargoyle only at night. It's still good, but that would have made it better. Just my opinion.

glad you stopped this one. It was interesting at first but it became 'boring' the more I read.
So glad you stopped. Chapter 1 to 9 and chapter 12 were great. The other ones are chapters I don't like very much.

I'm not saying that the story is bad but the chapters I named well two I already review and the last four are to long.

Still a good writer and write good stories. Sorry about this review.

First i love this story. second I don't like the Willow and Buffy in this DBZ version. They act like bitches and act they know it all.
they are keeping secrets while they expect from Buffy to trust them and tell them everything. Pffft. Even so Willow did act like they couldn't translate the book. So how could Buffy ask for helping translate it if Willow already showed they couldn't translate it themselves. She didn't say it but she did told her she thought it was Norse.

They also act like they know everything and are superior.

So I stopped reading these two chapters and go on with the next ones.

not likeing the db cross over tone to this piece though i do like buffy's 'dependance' on thailog it makes senc for the story.

Great Story!

Excellent story.

I love how this can go anywhere anytime.

Plus your an Aussie, so bonus points for locals : )

Thanks

I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens next on Starship Voyager and on Deep Space Nine.

This is going really good... looking forward to see what you come up with next!

Wispr

Your plot line is building very nicely and the I like the character development. Looking forward to more!

Wispr

I am enjoying the story more after each chapter I read. I look forward to reading more of them ASAP.

Really good first chapter! Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Wispr

I am really enjoying the story. I look forward to reading more of it ASAP.

This is a very good story. I look forward to reading the reast of it ASAP.

I just found the story. I am really enjoying it so far. I look forward to reading more of it ASAP.