Reviews for One Big Play |
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TheReaderofGods chapter 8 . 5/22 This naruto is stupid |
ADSOUL chapter 17 . 5/16 go up more is very goodgo up more is very good |
Jerson Vasquez Zuiga chapter 17 . 5/13 oh deberias de retomar la historia |
Santan Suprah chapter 2 . 1/28 the degeneracy is off the wall |
Santan Suprah chapter 2 . 1/28 fam isnt Arya like 10 rn, chill with that |
Santan Suprah chapter 1 . 1/28 what in the actual fuck |
Santan Suprah chapter 1 . 1/28 what in the fuck am i reading rn |
emoryjmorrill chapter 17 . 12/25/2019 Great story. Hope there’s more in the future. |
Chimamire009 chapter 17 . 9/29/2019 Please, Please, PLEASSSSEEEEE Continue This! |
qalleesyawesome chapter 17 . 8/29/2019 This story is so fun and interesting.. While im kinda in loop about this new people, im so excited to find out.. I hope you continue cause this is really amazing |
Ice chapter 7 . 8/8/2019 Dude fuk u are u writing a lemon story or wat u could ve put it in de headings and wat shitty story u wrote go luk for other hobbies nigga |
TheKingDoom chapter 17 . 6/24/2019 i want this history to continue |
hinatanamikazesama chapter 17 . 5/31/2019 Pleaseee updateee |
Savageverse chapter 17 . 5/26/2019 This is to king of yawns bitch stfu you suck oh your a flame wah wah grow up |
Haha chapter 6 . 5/16/2019 So, so far I have actually enjoyed this fic. The Lemons are quite erotic although Naruto could be less of a creep about it like with Arya, was kind of like he forced her into helping as opposed to Arya just being 'curious' after being poked in the bum lol. Seen a lot of people commenting on how the fic follows Canon despite the inclusion of Naruto, I honestly don't even know why you are bothering with ANY type of story line, would like it to be a straight up Lemon Story, don't really see the need for a plot in this. Just Erotic and uncommon pairings that most are to scared to do, regardless of wether it is Naruto/Arya or even Myrcella. That is another thing I noticed about reviewers, they are all up in arms about under age Lemons when a majority of those people are probably perfectly fine with Lolis in Lemons, under age or not. I suspect they are up in arms because it feels 'more real' as the actors are actual people as opposed to animations. Take Mikan from To Love Ru for example, she is only 11 Years Old but almost everyone I see review from that section is all for her in pairings or sexual relationships with whatever MC is there at the time. Double Standards or what huh? Dunno why people get all bent out of shape, this is ONLY Fanfiction. That being said this story looks dead and the re-write still hasn't come so I am kind of disappointed, would have liked to have seen more. |