Reviews for One Big Play
TheReaderofGods chapter 8 . 5/22
This naruto is stupid
ADSOUL chapter 17 . 5/16
go up more is very goodgo up more is very good
Jerson Vasquez Zuiga chapter 17 . 5/13
oh deberias de retomar la historia
Santan Suprah chapter 2 . 1/28
the degeneracy is off the wall
Santan Suprah chapter 2 . 1/28
fam isnt Arya like 10 rn, chill with that
Santan Suprah chapter 1 . 1/28
what in the actual fuck
Santan Suprah chapter 1 . 1/28
what in the fuck am i reading rn
emoryjmorrill chapter 17 . 12/25/2019
Great story. Hope there’s more in the future.
Chimamire009 chapter 17 . 9/29/2019
Please, Please, PLEASSSSEEEEE Continue This!
qalleesyawesome chapter 17 . 8/29/2019
This story is so fun and interesting.. While im kinda in loop about this new people, im so excited to find out.. I hope you continue cause this is really amazing
Ice chapter 7 . 8/8/2019
Dude fuk u are u writing a lemon story or wat u could ve put it in de headings and wat shitty story u wrote go luk for other hobbies nigga
TheKingDoom chapter 17 . 6/24/2019
i want this history to continue
hinatanamikazesama chapter 17 . 5/31/2019
Pleaseee updateee
Savageverse chapter 17 . 5/26/2019
This is to king of yawns bitch stfu you suck oh your a flame wah wah grow up
Haha chapter 6 . 5/16/2019
So, so far I have actually enjoyed this fic. The Lemons are quite erotic although Naruto could be less of a creep about it like with Arya, was kind of like he forced her into helping as opposed to Arya just being 'curious' after being poked in the bum lol.

Seen a lot of people commenting on how the fic follows Canon despite the inclusion of Naruto, I honestly don't even know why you are bothering with ANY type of story line, would like it to be a straight up Lemon Story, don't really see the need for a plot in this. Just Erotic and uncommon pairings that most are to scared to do, regardless of wether it is Naruto/Arya or even Myrcella.

That is another thing I noticed about reviewers, they are all up in arms about under age Lemons when a majority of those people are probably perfectly fine with Lolis in Lemons, under age or not. I suspect they are up in arms because it feels 'more real' as the actors are actual people as opposed to animations. Take Mikan from To Love Ru for example, she is only 11 Years Old but almost everyone I see review from that section is all for her in pairings or sexual relationships with whatever MC is there at the time. Double Standards or what huh?

Dunno why people get all bent out of shape, this is ONLY Fanfiction. That being said this story looks dead and the re-write still hasn't come so I am kind of disappointed, would have liked to have seen more.
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