The line [...sometimes it was never...completely wrong, too] doesn't make sense. It's either 'never' 'sometimes' or 'most' but it can't be all three.

Now that's out of the way, I love this chapter as usual. I like the train scenes although I could do with a little variety. Maybe pepper them in between other chapters and do the whole story out of order, or you know, keep doing what you're doing. I like that Cho's daughter is in this and the background you provided on her parents. And I love that Rita Skeeter is back and up to no good. She's a brilliant character and makes the best scapegoat. Can't wait to keep reading!

For someone who doesn't speak English as a first language, your spelling/grammar is amazing and the story flows beautifully, not rushed and not dragged out. I love how they boys explain everything to Chelsea through their perspective and the moment when she didn't know what Quidditch was made me laugh out loud. It was a great way to introduce an OC.

I know this isn't really a chapter but I'm intrigued by having Shacklebolt be Andromeda's second husband. I never pegged the two of them together but seeing it now make so much sense.

I'm intrigued by the possibility of Remus and Sirius living because they are such cool characters and it would be awesome to see them in a universe where they aren't constantly at war.

Even though Victoire isn't my most favourite character, this chapter was so heartwarming:D I loved Teddy's protectiveness at the beginning. And it's actually really funny because I know a girl with a very similar name to Amy Mills and, well, she's a b**** so thankfully this Amy Mills was much nicer. I also can't believe that Jess didn't know who Dumbledore was! Aah! How dare she!?

Hiiiiii there, how's it going?

First off, THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ALL MY PRECIOUS LOVELIES BACK TO LIFE THANK YOU!

Second off, it's quite evident that you're not a native English speaker, but if you've read the books or watched the movies or read and English books or watched any English movies, I think you should have a basic idea of how the British speak. Although, your English is really good. If it helps, it would be best to avoid words like 'cool', 'awesome' and the like that sound more American than English. The British counterparts would be 'brilliant' or 'fantastic'. Just thought I would help, since I know the pain of not being a native English speaker.

Thirdly, I'm really glad to see that you went through the effort of mentioning all your characters - especially the OCs - because it makes it so makes it so much easier to figure out who's who, considering the sheer number of characters there are.

Fourthly, yes, I completely agree with Andromeda being a Ravenclaw. I can't quite imagine her as anything else. And Hufflepuff is just out of the question (no offence, just being honest). So I'm glad someone's written to that headcanon.

Fifth, slight grammatical errors: the second sentence in paragraph one is too lengthy and drawn out. Cutting it short or changing the formatting should make it read better.
In paragraph two, mis-spelled 'three' as 'tree'.

Also, just some friendly advice; maybe it would help if you wrote different characters dialogues in different paragraphs. Makes it less confusing. Because there are almost three people talking simultaneously in one paragraph and it's kinda all mixed up in there. So just moving it to the next line should help a lot.

I like the idea of Charlie adopting, a LOT. I can't imagine how he has the time to chase Dragons AND raise a kid, but the idea is just adorable. Now all Molly's kids have kids of their own. I also liked Chelsea a lot and how you've characterized all the other OCs as well. Although, little Teddy's personality really doesn't match with how he's described in the epilogue, I'm sure he'll grow up to it.

Can't wait to read more! Great job!
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Oh my GOODNESS! This is honestly like my new favourite story! I have such a soft spot for these nextgen!fics. I also love the fact that tonks, lupin and sirius are still alive because I can't stand it that they did in the canon story:( your story flowed really well I thought and I was very grateful for the list of characters in c1 so well done for thinking of that! It can get very confusing for readers when there are a million new OCs. Your OCs are also very genuine and well written, which is something I know I personally find can be difficult to do. I hope you update soon because I'm seriously looking forward to reading more!

I did like this one. I like how you saved many of the characters and have a brand new one thrown it who doesn't know them already. That is rather rare I've found in stories. Most of them have the OC, (Mine -Tears of an Angel - included, kind of) know the cannon characters from the very beginning. All I have to say about Constructive Criticism is that you may want to get a Beta Reader, just to proofread and such. Great story anyways.

Cute, ahhhhh the Twins, youngsters. Trouble there. Cool. Thank you, Hope.

LOL, cute. Thank you, Hope

Really cute. I like it. Good job. Thank you, Hope.

This is really interesting, but I feel like it's less of "snapshots" and more of a multi chapter fic. I really hope you carry on by making this a full length story rather than just different aspects of life after the war.

Your writing is very clear, well organized, and descriptive... I'm amazed that you aren't a native English speaker! Eagerly awaiting more!

I'm really interested... And surprised you're not writing for Fred Weasley, Sr. Really interested in how this goes...