| Reviews for From an Ember Comes the Flame |
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FireDragonStarLight chapter 1 . 4/17/2019 Beautifully written. |
Jade chapter 1 . 7/14/2016 Love this! |
Erin Bloodrein Sage chapter 1 . 11/19/2015 Love it! - EBS - |
Moon Stone Tiger Lily chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 well that certainly was firey xD |
ninjakim13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 This was amazing! I like how you compared the feelings to fire, since Natsu is a fire dragon slayer :) |
kerapal bubbles chapter 1 . 2/7/2015 Whew! Is it hot in here or what?! It was very well written; I like your work! :D |
BakaRyuuChan chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 Beautifully done! Love the poetic language and unspecified settings, I felt a shudder go down my spine for a while there. I usually don't comment on people's grammar and spelling as I tend to be more focused on the content and flow of the story, but with this particular style I would recommend reading through your text an extra time before posting, simply because the language and flow is more important this time around. There were a few places where I stumbled on words and had to go back and check what you'd actually written; "and it is as if he is" for example, and "she wonders if fate made him a dragon slayer if just to save him from her flames". Aside from that, really well done, keep up the good work! |
DestinysRequiem chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 How... do... you... find... these... damn... prompts?! I have no idea where anyone gets them! |
monkeywahl chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 This was so beautiful how could it not be your favorite |
milkintheam chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Short, but sweet. I definitely liked Hot to Touch better, but I enjoyed this one too. I'm pretty stoked about kinky. |
kawaiikekechan chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 This was beautiful and so well crafted! A very well written metaphor, kudos! A perfectly formed oneshot 3 Excited for the lemon tomorrow! |
Dark Shining Light chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Super sexy! It's interesting to see that you used how you used 'heat' to describe Lucy. I was honestly thinking this would be through Natsu's perspective (cause he's a fire mage) but the concept of how Lucy feels when 'she's on fire' was a great one! LOVED IT :D |
obsessedwithnalu chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 I especially liked the line about fate making him a dragon slayer to save him from her flames. |
rougescribe chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Like you, I rather like drabbles. This was beautiful to read and I loved your descriptions towards the heat and fire. Your word choice makes me envious! |