| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Destiny Within |
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   steve.moore.9081323 chapter 26 . 9/11 Please More please Great story |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 6 . 9/11 Great story looking forward to more |
| Jack0827 chapter 26 . 9/5 Someone update this please! |
| piggyfeels347 chapter 26 . 6/3 I know it’s been 4 years now, but please do consider continuing this story! I love it and a great story! |
| King Cam the 1st chapter 26 . 5/18 I love this story. It's so sad that you haven't updated in ages. PLEASE update again. I really want to see what happens next. |
| c4t1n1p chapter 26 . 4/11 Dude.. aren't you going to finish this fucking great story? |
| DontMindMe chapter 26 . 10/2/2019 Shame you have abandoned this story. . |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2019 You really need to read more published works and actual novels, as opposed to fan fiction, because quite a lot of what you’ve written doesn’t technically make sense. The little that does make sense doesn’t read well either. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2019 I found this story recently and tried to read it, but I can't. Your grammar is atrocious. |
| staar chapter 26 . 4/22/2019 nice ! |
| Raymondjay41 chapter 26 . 1/14/2019 Hopefully this gets finished as I have truly enjoyed reading this story! The plot line and twists are utterly fantastic! |
| Andrew Peverell chapter 26 . 12/7/2018 Just awesome! Update please! |
| howlsword chapter 26 . 11/12/2018 very very good story , please update asap... |
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/19/2018 They say in the magical world " Never tickle a sleeping dragon. " Well, it seems these moronic Death Eaters are doing their damndest to not only wake the dragon but to really piss it off as well! I wonder how ol' moldymorts will react when this raiding party also fails to return? I'm eagerly awaiting the remaining chapters in this story regardless of how long the story takes to finish. |
| Bronze chapter 25 . 8/19/2018 You need a bit of help with your choice of words. I easily understood what you meant but the word itself was wrong. You used the word " user " when you meant " ushered " . " Those " instead of "though ". Mistakes like that. Don't take this wrong as I'm enjoying the story. I can't offer to Bata this as you need someone who knows punctuation and proper grammar. At best I absolutely must guess at both! |
