Loved it!

Loved it

Honestly I liked the story... but do you seriously have to make it like she is really young and he is much older? Like that killed it for me. Now I'm thinking he is some pedophile... I don't like to think like this...

It was a very good story, you made me cry at the end... :'v
*Cry in the corner of a dark room by herself*
But congrats anyway!

Ahhhhh Nice sweet story! Thanks for writing about tobirama! He is the best!

I love this story and the characters! I was a little unsure of it at first because I don't usually like stories with a lot of OCs but you did it perfectly. I've been hooked since chapter 1. I love Tobi and Chika's relationship, it's sweet and strong [like Tobirama's arms ;) ]. I also really love the Shikaya and Maki pairing, I wasn't expecting to love it so much but it just hooked me.

I really love this story.

Loved your story , now favourited!

Very emotional. And I love that Madara stayed in the end. I've always thought Konoha would be better if they managed to include the Uchiha and Madara stayed instead of going insane with hate.

It was a nice ending :)

Is it bad that I'm happy that my shikaMaki ship can sail peacefully now

I can't wait to see hasirama's reaction.. Honestly, most of the time the man is an overgrown child! He is just like baritone except more intimidating, and knows how to use his strength, and serious when the time calls for it (in his mind it usually doesn't though).

The review for chap. 8, was supposed to be for this chapter.. Where you broke my rib... Seriously.. Pay for that..
It seems like Tobirama is erasing her just a bit

I can't stop laughing with secondhand embarrassment! Pay for damages of the rib your writing broke!

Great one sniff, sniff :)