| Reviews for Untitled Love Story |
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TitaCL chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 Hola! Puede decirme donde puedo leerlo?, gracias. |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/22/2017 Great Story. Love the ending ;) good luck with the publishing |
Y.et.caterpillar chapter 14 . 12/19/2017 Thank you for sharing and writing this somewhat fairytale happy ending story. And thanks a bunch for not taking this down as yet. It was beautiful reading through 13 chapters. Vex is going to be dearly missed with his antiques, and forever loved for his fearless loyalty to Lauren. Only one heck very much lucky souls to have their strange bond lasts in the reality. So, once again, thank you. Wishing you, your muse, beta and all; a bundle of joy for late 2017 holidays and bright upcoming 2018. |
Liliana C chapter 13 . 12/15/2017 Hello! I love your story, is one of my favorites, and I want to know if I can translate it into Spanish and adapt it to a ship called Camren. I would only make some changes to the names of some characters but the story will be the same and obviously all the credits will be yours. I'm not trying to appropriate your idea, I'd just like more people to know it because it's amazing and, to me, it's magical. The adaptation would go up to Wattpad. What are you saying? |
virginiablack517 chapter 4 . 12/16/2017 This chapter reminded me of why I love New York. Exquisitely written. Well done! |
lilys1206 chapter 13 . 12/15/2017 Hello! I love your story, is one of my favorites, and I want to know if I can translate it into Spanish and adapt it to a ship called Camren. I would only make some changes to the names of some characters but the story will be the same and obviously all the credits will be yours. I'm not trying to appropriate your idea, I'd just like more people to know it because it's amazing and, to me, it's magical. The adaptation would go up to Wattpad. What are you saying? Liliana C. |
kogaduck chapter 13 . 12/6/2017 Just found this wonderful story. I love it! Thanks for writing this. I think you should do a sequel. I want to know what happened in their acting careers. |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/29/2017 Re-reading this story, loving it as much as I did the first time round. Though I still don't get I about it being Lauren's first time as well ? Would you please clarify for me ? I hope you have other stories in the making |
Shomed chapter 13 . 10/25/2017 What an amazing love story! My heart soared and broke along with these characters! Truly amazing! |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/15/2017 Thank you for the update keep them coming |
krdavis14 chapter 12 . 10/10/2017 What a lovely surprise to find this beautiful story of yours here for us to enjoy again...one that also allows new readers an opportunity to read a truly special, well written/edited, and simply magical journey for your Bo and Lauren! One of my absolute favorite stories on this site, so thank you once again, DW, for returning her to us for however long or short of a time frame that may be! Kudos to Kravn - awesome job! |
FrenChi chapter 13 . 10/10/2017 Wonderful story! The great acting won as well as Love. Big Love. True Love. Thank you for reposting and congratulations to Kravn for her fantastic job! :) Now, please, keep on writing "As remote As The Silver Sea" :) |
FrenChi chapter 8 . 10/10/2017 As I'm in a full run reading your reposting, I can't help reviewing about your Brigitte BarBo Vex's pun. hehe! Well done :) :) And of course, on one hand, I understand Bo because she genuinely thinks that once she is taken seriously as a real actress, she will be free both in her Professional and private life, allowing her to live her life fully with Lauren and on the other hand... Lo looks like the waiting and secret mistress, longing for her lover to come back to her for a short time and then disappearing again and on and on... |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2017 Aside from the Doccubus storyline, I also loved how you portrayed New York - I've lived here for 5 years (coincidentally, also close to Bleecker and 6th Ave) and I've been worn down by reality, no longer starry-eyed about being in New York f'n City like I was when I first arrived. However, reading your story reminds me of the magic I used to feel. That's meant to be the job of Salinger and F. Scott Fitzgerald, not an indie writer on FF! Fingers crossed that you have every success with publication. |
FrenChi chapter 1 . 3/21/2017 This story is too good to be not finished so it's really good news :) and please, don't forget your other story "As Remote As The Silver Sea" such a captivating story, too :) And thank you for your words for your readers. The best thing in FF is that, sometimes, authors and readers are nearly a team but the writer remains the Captain of the boat :) |