Really good. Well written. Captivating my interest from the first sentance. Then the denouement. My heroes didn't bag the bitch? Aghh! Still, although it felt like the first five chapters of a much longer story, I enjoyed it very much and think you should have had more than 13 reviews for this kind of quality.

I’ve have to say, you really got me from the outset here. I read that first chapter and I cannot remember ever feeling so satisfied that Goren and Eames were going to get someone. What a despicable woman. I’m not sure what in particular got me riled up, but I wanted her caught real bad.

And then she wasn’t. I don’t mind telling you I feel quite betrayed. I have a very small hope that you have been working on part two of the finale where they get her for the past few years, which should make it a blinder, but it is a very faint hope indeed. This is worse than Nicole Wallace! Or as bad as… No, worse! At least there’s an alternate episode out there where she dies, and I do believe they’ll get her eventually. This seems to be all wrapped up. Sigh. I choose stubbornly to believe they got Samantha “off camera”.

The numerology was a great touch! It is so perfect for identity theft I’m almost tempted to go into it. Loved Goren’s illegal IRS search too.

You are my favorite writer of CI fic. This story was fabulous! I would love to read a sequel.

Excellent story! I loved it! Margarent Samantha Karen whatever reminds me a lot of Nicole Wallace. Great fic!

WOW, I Thought this fic was really good,. Loved the ending, keep writing more stories. As I said this one was GREAT. I LOVED IT.

Great writin

Don't believe you stopped it here! It's just amazing! (reminds me a lot of Anti-thesis, my favorite ep so far). Wow! Congrats!

Like i said WOW! i'm still amazed by your talent. Puzzeled even as to why you dont get more reviews.

You certainly deserve them! lol

Keep it up! And i cant wait for more of your work! lol ill be looking VERY forward to them *winks*

I enjoyed the story but I am AWED by the ending. That was excellent!

o.o WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING? lol now that you know I’m all jealous of you and everything, I’ll move onto something else, something like...oh, I don’t know...writing the next chapter!

You have to continue soon, I’m dying to read it. Your sentences flow without hesitation and just the way you write. It's so clear, precise and real.

It's hard to describe your writing, but that's because there aren’t enough words to describe how good it is.

Well done!

What? No, no, no! You *must* come back and finish the story! :)

This is amazing-suspenseful, thrilling... I can't wait for the next installment!

I'm so hooked on this it's not funny. I'm just about to catch the bus to uni and what am i doing? LOL reading your fic!

the way you portrayed Bobby was perfect, especially about how he was too engrossed in the case to notice anything. I guess it also shows how much trust he has in Eames because he didn't even read the final statement. He trusted her enough to know she was writing the right thing.

This was a really good chapter! i think Bobby's onto something as usual!

I'd like to see more soon, not that i'm rushing you or anything *hint hint nudge nudge*

I also wanted to thank you for reviewing my story! I might write a prequel actually hehe just to explain a few things. Thanks for the sugguestion i would never have thought it otherwise!

Really nice discription, you've captured the intensity of the killing as well as the wife's distress to a tee.

This is really fantastic writing, keep it up. I'm on the edge of my seat.

This is really good!

The crime has me hooked already, i can't wait to read the next part. The plot is starting to sound like something that will keep me on the edge of my seat.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Well I'm hooked!