Poor Pakmar. If it's not Ben it's someone else.

His ninja pouch full of sharp pointy things?

I'm real iffy on this due to it holding him back on his own strength. Also while there have been more series, as far as the ones I remember theres only 1 maybe 2 that could be stronger than what he becomes on his own. One being a cosmic entity of some sort. With him unable to pick and choose and again not focusing on developing himself. Idk.

Unless I suppose this focuses on using clones to train and make up for it.

why is sasuke so nice in this fan fic?

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Although I feel you may have already finished with the sound five I feel that these aliens would be the best matches

A sonorsorian for tayuya so she can extend her power and range of her sound genjutsu

A crystalsapien for Jirobou to augment his chakra eating technique or maybe a vaxasaurian for him to grow with his cursed seal since he seems to focus on strength while in his cursed stages

For kidomarou an arachnichimp to go along with his Jutsu and spider summons

For sakon and ukon I would say ditto because there is nothing I find really unique about them besides their ability to split and act separately from each other. sure they had a lot of chakra and powerful moves but so did the others.

And if you did kimmimaro I would have suggested a petrosapien with kimmimaro augmenting his bones using diamond heads abilities he would have been significantly stronger

why the hell is Valmark And Orochimaru so shocked to learn Naruto is back, Kabuto told them that Naruto was back 3 chapters ago

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This sounds like a tutorial on a Ben 10 game sequal.

green isn't really naruto's color, don't force more Ben 10 if it's not needed.

I like this and all but azmuth needs some real work. such a weak reason to change naruto's clothes. Ben wore neon green and white I don't see how that's any Harder to spot, if he doesn't like it just say it don't come up with a dumb excuse.

I love how oblivious azimuth is to naruto's situation when he unnecessarily insults naruto. "is this a watch?you dimwit!" so what else is he supposed to call it? he's looking at an alien device that looks heavily like some over advanced watch. also your gonna insult him over not knowing the existence of a world that no one else knows about? really azmuth? grow up.

Soooo. . . Suddenly some ninja (Orochimaru?) knows about the omnitrix? If so, I call bullshit.
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Though if it's an alien in charge . . . no . . .