Write more soon please. Love it.

That story cracked me up update soon

She's hilarious

I like rude OC's. More realistic. They wouldn't be like omg cool hobbits wizards and dwarves sweet!

They'd be traumatized and missing home and confused.

LOVE this story! I don't think I've ever read a "Girl falls in ME" fic with an antagonistic protagonist, but I am loving this. Although Naomi starts off being selfish and cold, you've given plenty of glimpses into what she's really like underneath, and that's enough to make me want to stay and see how this quest will change her. Despite her flaws, I see hope for her and what she could be. You've got me hooked and I really hope you will be finishing this fic at some point, because you have done such a fantastic job and I can't wait to read more!

kili/oc

Congratulations on your graduation, though it is rather late. I truly hope you continue on with this story as it is fantastic

kili/oc

love your character and your writing style.
Kili/naomi or even kili/thorin
please more kili interactions, he's great.

please please please make this kili/naomi

In love with this story, a shame the pairing is with thorin though.

Ever think about writing something like this but kili/oc or better yet naomi/kili.
-great chapter

Naomi's character is brilliant and certainly a refreshing change to the sweet, kind and over all mary sue-ish OCs one tends to find on here. I would be lying if I said she didn't remind me of myself.
Love it and looking forward to read more

please please please update it's been months and this is such a good story

Okay, so wow. I am in love with Naomi. She is a very real, very believable character and I am way too attached for only 16 chapters to be here. Her quirks are consistent, and I am beyond interested to see her future character development.
Also, congratulations on keeping everyone else in character. It seems like half the fanfiction community cannot comprehend personalities, but you have done an excellent job so far. (Ori's little "But why?"s crack me up.)
I would love to see this continue! You have a great thing going and realistic OC's are few and far between. I understand that you have an actual life, so don't worry if the next chapters take a while. I eagerly await them either way!