Reviews for Bait
prettydynamic chapter 9 . 11/8/2018
i think jack fits the perpetrator better because he is suave and attractive. those that are able to lure women to hurt them are the charming ones. Even Sharon didnt like Lyle but she liked Jack lol and made Andy jealous
prettydynamic chapter 6 . 11/8/2018
yehey a shandy. you have a very nice solid plot and story developement but it sure would be icing in the cake if there was shandy sprinkled on it. :)
seaford71 chapter 12 . 5/9/2017
What an awesome story
ProfTweety chapter 12 . 3/29/2016
Glad Andy finally had the nerve and the chance to tell Sharon he was interested in more than just friendship. Nice way to end the fic.
AngieBlond chapter 10 . 3/26/2016
Will you please write another chapter? I can not wait to read further...the story is really good xo
TeaNSympathy chapter 12 . 3/25/2016
I just found this story and binge-read it all at one sitting and it is sheer perfection. So so good. Love that Sharon saved herself, love how strong she is, love the ending. You are an amazing writer and I don't know why you are not writing scripts for Major Crimes (at least , that is my assumption). Utterly brilliant. Please write another one soon!
Betsy chapter 12 . 3/25/2016
I started reading this in the morning and figured I'd finish it over the weekend - but found myself reading it at my desk at work and any chance I could get - great story!
Leauh2o chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
Found this story today and had to read all 12 chapters. It was inspired. Love the fact that Sharon saved herself so appreciate you not letting her be a damsel in distress. You balanced an intriguing crime story with the character stories. So thankful you finished this. I hope that you "finish" and post more
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Guest chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
Throughly enjoyed this story. Look forward to reading more of your works.
CaptainBadAssMarshmallowFluff chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
gahhh, yes. I loved your handling of the characters and the story kept true to the feel on major crimes. congrats on finishing and thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
Enjoyed very much!
jaci chapter 12 . 3/24/2016
amei o final gostaria que não acabasse,espero por mas fanfic,não demore pra escreve.
SueBaker chapter 11 . 2/22/2016
You need to finish this...great story.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/21/2016
I just found out about this story today from one of the FB posts. I read the whole thing, and I love it.
Although the murders were solved, it seems to have stopped very abruptly, like it needs an epilogue.
How about it, Ms Procrastinator, please?!
jaci chapter 11 . 2/21/2016
ei cade a continuação
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