I really, really like the description of Ganondorf's palace: it was so very vivid and also succinct

As always, simply impeccable. Beautiful descriptions, vivid imagery, incredible story...you never cease to amaze.

Hmm. Not bad. The idea behind it is certainly interesting. A Zelgan pairing is one that always has the chance to be interesting if done right. If this is a one-shot then it is good to me. If there turns out to be more...then I'll be sure to read it.

An interesting perspective on the Zelda/Ganondorf ship. I had not noticed how well they fit this particular myth before.

I'm only vaguely familiar with the Persephone and Hades relationship, so I'm not sure exactly how the two stories compare; I did really like this, though. Evokes the good feels.

That was interesting. A little bit confused, but I feel like I get the overall idea of the fanficiton. Symbolism, right? Anyway, you're a talented writer and know how to make your sentences fit together with great harmony. I could just picture what was happening in my head like I was watching it. It takes great skill to be able to illustrate through words like that. I praise your ability! You made both Zelda and Ganondorf's speech sound regal, as well they should be since Zelda's a princess and Ganny's, well, Ganny XP. You painted these characters nicely and I hope to read more of your works soon!
Keep up the good work! :3