I've only just started this but already I find myself shipping Takeshi and Katashi

This is AWESOME!

Hummingbirds are an interesting choice.

Suna wants you to become a shinobi! Become the next greatest lying liar who lies*!

*but not too great or you'll be taken care of...

This is a great fic. I like the dynamics of Team Awesome. I'm rereading this fic again and I think you do Gaara well.

This is honestly a masterpiece. I absolutely love your story; the plot, the world-building and the depth of your characters. Katashi's personality is just so interesting and the story of someone so seemingly average becoming something is very fascinating.

Your description of Suna and its political climate is very interesting. It shows exactly what for a place that village is and how the Kazekage's doing lead to the invasion during the chunin exam.

I like your way of describing the character's mental state. How some emotion are expressions are expressed through just a few mixed up words, but still contain everything that is important.

I love Katashi's character. He is reasonable and so logical in mind, but his loyalty is truly astounding. It's amazing how he goes leaps and bounds for his loved ones and so desperate for everything to become right again.

Anyway, thanks for writing this amazing story. I really enjoy it.

I love this story. I read it on Ao3 first, so I'm very excited for this one to get up to date and moving. The only thing I confess to wanting to see more of is maybe a powerhouse lady. I like Kauro and Shizure, of course, but neither of them really know what's going on and are either not a front liner or used as blackmail. No pressure to squeeze it in, it's just a thought that I've been fantasizing about a little. In any case, great story, great characters, and I love the hummingbirds.

Well... Tbh I suggest making a character sheet/chart for the more noticeable Oc's - specially Takashi. I'm honestly confused as to what his abilities are - since, well, chidori, perchant for eggplants, similar name to Kakashi, seems to have sensory skills and Magnet Release? idk. And, I didn't really know what was going on since the situations changed many times in a short period.

Like, Kakuzu popping out of nowhere, confusing timeline (at the very least It must be after the Uchiha Massacre), patrol mission, uh, home... :x

Oh god. You just had to leave it there, didnt you? Ikku is a traitor. Kaoru doesnt have a leg. Takeshi doesnt wanna do field work. And Katashi is a future Hokage candidate. Its way too much like Kakashi situation. Katashi is also way too loyal to his team. I dont know. Will Ikku regret it? I want to know what happens. Can hummingbirds fight or provide support? Or fly him to safety? Where is Kakashi? He is Anbu of Anbu. Can hide from Anbu pretty easily. Where is he? And he was also in root. Once. Probably either in anime or manga.

That explains things so much better! The first change in their friendship was his realisation of his genius. Then was the torture. Then their Anbu. Then both their paths diverted. And their friendship is so good. And beautiful. And there. I love it. Its awesome.

I hope Ikku gets the chance to explain. In the end they are both trying to protect Kaoru. I really do like this story and cant wait for more.

I hope Ikku gets the chance to explain. In the end they are both trying to protect Kaoru. I really do like this story and cant wait for more.

This story is so interesting! It's an interesting take on time travel, and I think it's really well-done. It's sort of heartbreaking to see Gaara with his siblings. I like the snippets of the stream of consciousness from Katashi. I also like him a lot and I wonder if Gaara is right about who will replace his father. I wonder what Ox will do now. I hope Katashi gets his team back. Thanks for sharing this! I look forward to the next chapter.

Karachi is a surprising character that I didn't expect to read about . This story is very interesting and I can't wait for the next update .

Love this story! More!