Is Elim, based on Garak, from Star Trek; Deep Space 9?

Nicely written. As an FYI, the Star Trek: The Next Generation Technical Manual was (AFAIK) available during the timeframe of this story. The first trade paperback printing of this book was November of '91, so it should've been available in time for Christmas of that year...

I love all the different stories in this world you created!

I'm usually a Hermione/Snape/Harry fan when it comes to stories I read involving one of the three of them. (Not "together".) I have to say though, this addendum to the original story is brilliant and makes a lot more sense on his change in the main story. Very very well done. (Though I would have loved to see an addendum of Ron getting his butt handed to him by Judith.)

Loved this story especially. Thanks for writing and posting it.

I really liked this tale. Thank you for writing and posting it.

Interesting story. Let Junior live. Will Victorias' baby have his soul?

Interesting story. Will be happy to see Junior fully restored.

Beside the abuse, this is a fascinating idea.

Good for Draco!

Glad that toad was handled!

Great Christmas! Even if FJ isn't the same age he will still be there. Although I certainly hope they give him a different name.

Sounds like a beautiful Christmas. How is it that Severus and now everyone knows that Harry could have been in Slytherin and that he said "not Slytherin"?
Also I point out Victoria may be the oldest child but Draco is the oldest male and thus is the Heir by primogeniture. Also Victoria's child would never usurp Draco's place.

Erlene's reaction is to be expected. I do hope Lucius decides to help the families of the other of Price's victims. He has enough money. Plus a little veritaserum and Price would be singing like a canary. He could even confess to murdering FJ.

Excellent! I like the fact that FJ can visit with his sisters. The fact that they are Lucius' children was a great plot twist.