love this can't wait for more!

I liked it I've read it a million times I think you should write some more of it another chapter or two

Love it!

Loved it even do Brian was out of character. I wish you would write a 2nd chapter

LOVE IT!

I wish this was longer. I’d be interested to see where it could go.

I absolutely adored it, though considering Brian's character I expected a little more sexual tension, Brian being the stubborn little shit we know and love ;) that definitely doesn't mean it ruined the whole thing though, I really did love it.

Ah I loved Vince in this. (And Dom and Brian of course)!

Add more chapters please

ADD MORE PLEASE!

You write the plot very will you write more chapters or is it going to stay a one-shot?

Loved the idea behind this. Esspecially love the protective Vince figure within this, the way you portray him going from furious to horrified so quickly was really great. Yay protective Vince!

Yeah, it's been a while since you posted this but I'll review anyway since I think that's what one is supposed to do. Moving on, the best way to express my feeling right now would be to say that I need time before I can coherently say it cause I'm currently drowning in the feels. That probably says it all, but anyway this was great. If you were going for feeling wrecking, you achieved that. Also, the fact that you use the correct use of your and you're is making me so happy it's ridiculous. That's random I know, but so often people use the wrong one and it annoys the heck out of me, so good writing.

I absolutely love this story and I come back to it time and time again. It would be even better if you wrote another chapter about what happened next!

Love it happy that he brought him to dom