I DEMAND MORE! In the sequel, add Shrek the almighty Memelord.

A VERY DAMN COOL STORY !

Am happened on it today and love suie extreme.

Maybe there will be a sequel.

See you soon perhaps.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos

ive never seen mortal combat i used to play it a long time ago but i forgot what it was aaalllllllllllllll about,so if i ask kinda dumb stuff could someone pleas answer...thanks XD

What the fuck! Why is elsa killing people left and right. And WHY did she kill the Russian and not the others? At least TRY to be politically neutral.

I hope you make a sequel to this story

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Hey! I saw your post on the forum, so I decided to leave a review. I just read the first chapter, and I'm Mortal Combat fandom blind, so here it goes.

The story starts off good, and I like the ending, the cliffhanger makes me want to read more, even if I was just skimming the first chapter.

I didn't really notice any big grammar issues, more many actually. Just maybe like, one period missing. So you seem good there. You used begged twice, and reworded it. Know it's OKAY to use said.

Also, after looking over it, it does seem like you said Shao Kahn many times, so unless maybe there is another name for him or a way to refer to him that people would get, I guess it's okay. It sound better to maybe describe his appear somewhere?

I found it sad that there could have been PLENTY of more detail. I get there people want to read dialogue, but I've seen Frozen and written it in third person plenty of times. You could have added so much detail on small things such as how Elsa was feeling when seeing Pabbie show her the future instead of just: "The girl gave a small gasp." It's possible to do this in third person.

Overall, it's a nice start to the story (and I do know there are more chapters. I hope I can help you for future chapters or perhaps give feedback that would be good. I'm not trying to sound rude at all, just to help! :)

That was bloody brilliantl!
So is there any sequel?
But the Sub Zero in Mortal Kombat X didn't aged that far!

Armageddon is coming

This is the most amazeing I have ever read , I hope you do another one just like this one .

Hey, brave1! Remember me? You suggested your story for my community. I realize that has been Quite some time ago, but recently I got intrigued to read this story, because I am a Life long Mortal Kombat fan.

At first, I wanted to Review at the end, because I Didn't want to Drop a Review in every chapter, but have to ask: You snatched those line at Elsa's introduction from Batman Begins, didn't you?

Great story so far, BTW. :)

I've always believed that has always been Emma's destiny - that she will one day take magic beyond Storybrooke.

Biggest OMG moment when Elsa learned what the Duke tried to do to Ingrid. Wow, she totally lost it.
And Rumple... some people just never change!

All in all you've written a hell of a good story. Any plans for a sequel? (esp with MKX coming out?)

Good to see the Duke get what was alway coming. An obvious tribute to the "Lady Snowblood" movies, right? ;)

So Shinnok is now in Storybrooke seeking the Author?!

Loved your explanation of why the Elder Gods didn't stop Regina creating Storybrooke. The fact that the Elder Gods can't tell the difference between real worlds and those formed from imagination (like the Enchanted Forest) was a very interesting twist and you weaved it perfectly with Shinnok's backstory. Well Done.

So Jack Frost is the future child of Elsa and Sub-Zero? Sweet! Yet sad that they are already dying (Just saw "Frozen Fever" at the cinema before "Cinderella", and when Elsa caught a cold, I couldn't help but picture the scene)

Henry and Jade shipping?! 0_o That's original, but very cute.

This is a great story!