This is in no way criticism but I disagree with the rating on this because it doesn't have any like actual sex scenes so it should really be rated T. The story was great though.

Oh no I’ve thoroughly enjoyed this just a shame it stopped here.
I’d love to read more if you need any encouragement to carry on

please update again soon

love the fact that they are pretending to be married

jack is super creepy but was happy killian defended her

meant to say "Cottage" not college oops

thought the interaction between the bears was a little interesting and super happy they are at the point of joking around with each other I am curious to see who lives in the College

wow, Goldilocks and the three bears? this should be interesting I hope killian is ok

glad they are at the point of at least being somewhat friends though I can't wait for some more drama and of course romance to start

I hope they are able to get rescued before something bad happens happy they are at least getting along as friends! I hope it turns into more

glad they are at least getting along! I hope they get rescued soon

this story sounds super interesting cannot wait to read more

Where did you go? Please for the love of all that's good in this world update. I love your stories this one is so cute. I can't wait to read their next adventure

Yay you updated! I love this story so much. Watching them bumbling around being awkward teenagers is adorable. All the misunderstandings are agonizing, like the one about holding hands. I'm so excited that they finally had a conversation without arguing. And Emma's realization had me cheering - that it might be nice to marry someone who cared enough to give her the bigger tart, especially since it was her pearl they used to get them it the first place. That and her finding him handsome and wondering what it would be like to sleep with him. This chapter had so many advancements! I'm so so happy. Thank you so much for juggling your stories and continuing to update them. Your slow burn is the slowest slow burn I've ever read but it makes all the little steps forward all the more enjoyable.

That chapter went back in forth of giddiness to sadness. Poor emma and her marriage manual and the humiliation of to see the continuation of this with killian's pov and his thoughts on all that she has revealed. I do hope they get to travel at least a month together before getting to their destination.
And they are running out of goods to barter with soo I wonder what they will do.
And of course I'm highly curious about those they left behind.