Your story is just incredible. I love the development of Gaara's character. But he just gets screwed, poor boy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you're doing well. Bye.

I just re-read your fic again for like the hundredth time. I just wanted to say I think it is amazing and hope you are doing well. And yes, I do think you are a bit dramatic.

I have reread this story so many times and the elevator scene never fails to make me smile!

Hi there, nice to see you back.
...And my worst fears were realised, Gaara got again the most damage. I knew it all along, you love to maim and torture the "poor baby". ;)
...Cheating death wasn't math, but art... It is a perfect quote, please grant them some more of this art.
Thanks for the new chapter,and stay well.

Honestly I don't think I've seen you write something that looked like it desperately wanted to be a poem rather than a story. And honestly? I struggled with understanding a lot of it. I'm pretty sure some of it was the structure of sentences was missing, some words were used incorrectly and the rest? The language was just too much, too heavy, to over the top. Once I hit the part where Gaara got a hit of meth, I seriously wondered if you hadn't taken something yourself as you admitted to struggling with the chapter, just to finally get the thing under control.

Which is honestly too bad, because I got the feeling this chapter could have been like those amazing fight scenes where it's like some kind of narration from the music itself guiding the destruction and death.

I think maybe take a breather from struggling with it and come back at a later time to read with fresh eyes. I know if I reread something too many times, I'll see what is supposed to be there, rather than what is.

you deserve so much more

ah love this chapter! soo excited to read the next, although inaccurate I hope they can recover from their injuries so they are not permanetly disabled

I love that you're still continuing this, I've been reading this since 2016 and I've never stopped loving it! Can't wait for the next update!

A nightmare sequence. One of the boys' over active imaginations being expressed in one, great, big, long and detailed verse for an entire chapter. /A NIGHTMARE SEQUENCEANYTHING. I adore you, but do you have aNY idea how many desperate excuses I was trying to come up with so I wouldnt believe all of what was taking place so far. My nerves are so fringed right now; how the hell is Naruto holding up, because I know his can't be much better. I was in my car reading the rest of this, and might have collapsed a blood vessel in my lung when I realized I reached the end of the chapter.

I hope you know this was a delicious morsel of an installment. They always are. Very regularly revered for being worth the wait with just enough cliff hanger to keep me up for few moments at night trying to figure out what happens next. And thank you for explaining the layout of their three story house. Some details are still a little befuddling, but I had a suspicion that it was, at the very least, a split level house from some of the clues you had given previously. And also idk how you do it, it I'd love to be the fly on your wall when it comes to seeing the extensive searching around you do to pull off some of these damn death-challenging tricks, some of these acts should be impossible, good goddess.

Love! just re read, love the new updates, will there be new chapters soon?

Never have i read something so beautifully written! This story is so complex with characters so real and artfully created that I can’t help but praise this amazing piece of work! The end to this chapter was truly something I could only ever hope to write.

Rise from the dead soon

Nooo

Ohhh my god I’ve read this three times and I never get tired of it

It has been too long since I came back to this, delightful as ever. Eternally grateful you never gave up on this, I love you!