| Reviews for Black Magic |
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JadeDragon100 chapter 11 . 6/10 I really, really liked this. I’m not sure whether this will continue but I’ll follow for the sake of interest, I’ve been having way too much fun with this to leave if there’s the slimmest chance of it continuing. Lovely story, great writer. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/21 The fanfic is very confusing with all the stuff going all at once, its like a dream that when you wake up from and sort through what you dreamt of that you realise that it made no sense |
Erandile chapter 3 . 4/1 I'm not gonna lie but it's actually Bullshit that Harry say that he can kill 2 Valar guarding and standing at the Doors of Night, one of the Guard standing at the door of night can punch Harry Potter using continental attacks. But it's cool I know this is just fanfic and Good job keep it going. |
IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 8 . 3/5 I really wish you would continue this hilarious masterpiece. It’s amazing |
mickeysofine chapter 6 . 11/11/2019 You have no idea what you're writing. earn your source materials before combining them. About the only thing in common with the respective canon's is the character's names. |
mckertis chapter 11 . 9/23/2019 This story gave a modicum of entertainment. Naturally, such things are always left unfinished. Inevitably. |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/19/2019 Occasionally, I run across stories that I'm actually invested in reading. But then, wen I'm off to last chapter, it's on hiatus or discounted. Why are all the good stories unfinished or smthn? |
karmakrosvik1 chapter 11 . 3/22/2019 Great story. |
Bibliotheca Mundi chapter 11 . 1/29/2019 I might be even less invested in Lord of the Rings than I am Star Wars and Bleach, but this was still another good read. Though considerably harder to follow at times compared to your other two stories. A product of time and experience I'm sure. Still, it has been interesting to see how it went, the fact that Harry is working with Melkor, in a sense, and seeking the assistance of Mairon is also quite interesting. Though the story might never see its completion it is an amusing thought that Harry could possibly gain himself some massive amounts of magic, only for the low, low price of having a total of two or three dark lords within his head. Thank you for writing this. |
Mor chapter 11 . 1/27/2019 Damn, is it bad that I want to see the interaction between Tom and Melkor and see the jealousy and possessiveness spark between them over Harry? |
Fullmetal11791 chapter 11 . 1/13/2019 Been a few years since the last update, hope everything worked out with your surgeries. |
Fullmetal11791 chapter 3 . 1/12/2019 I have been reading harry potter fanfiction on and off for almost a decade, and this is the first time i have seen the idea of a grimoire as a foci. Have to say, very cool idea. Dont know where you got it from, but love it. |
OldDustX chapter 11 . 11/4/2018 I love how this story crashes through canon, please update. |
pineapple-pancake chapter 11 . 10/5/2018 Wow this story has blowed my mind. Very unusual and clever. Congratulations for the writer and I am very grateful for being able to read it for free. I love LOTR stories, and particularly those that include elves and all the divine mystical beings of arda, and I love Gandalf, so reading this has me conflicted, because I don't want the destruction of middle earth! and it would be the biggest crime to destruct so many lives, and it doesn't make sense to accelerate the destruction of a beautiful world just because it will get destroyed anyway (which rings a bell with our earth). Yet I am fascinated with your Melkor and all the greys of this story. I would suggest to not make the bad guys (Gandalf, Elrond and so on) not so bad so it gets more interesting and real. |
Wow chapter 11 . 8/21/2018 You’re amazing. |