| Reviews for A new story - Divergent fanfic |
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  Minkymoocow chapter 22 . 7/18/2018 Ok it started off really good but then it just got pathetic and I just got really bored also why didn’t u do more training and initiation instead of focusing it on the one pathetic little kidnapper aka Eric/Chanel and I honestly don’t care about me spoiling it now because I’m really pissed at how pathetic this story was. It was really good at the starts how everyone likes tris and Tobias and they should have ended up getting beaten by them and have Libby die or something because she is divergent and I don’t like how she looks like tris and is divergent because then ur basically just cloning tris so overall this story was crap |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/23/2017 OMG IS IT MARLENE |
 ellie.atkins11 chapter 21 . 5/7/2016 write more please I love this story |
| MentalityWriter13 chapter 22 . 12/13/2015 Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel!Sequel! |
| AMAZINGNESS chapter 21 . 6/26/2015 WOAH THIS IS TOTALLY AMAZEBALLS CAN U LIKE STEP ON IT AND WRITE THE SEQUEL |
| divergentloverxoxo chapter 8 . 2/1/2015 Hey great story :) |
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/1/2015 I'd love to be in a chapter! My name is Maja and I'm blonde with clear blue eyes. :) |
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/31/2015 Awesome but the cliff hangers keep having me wonder and Amy minute I'm going to break this machine ( going crazy ) |
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/31/2015 THATS FINE BUT PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE! |
| First Runner chapter 21 . 1/31/2015 Hahaha.. funny. I'm just going to put a fake name in. Ashlynn ,Asian, brown asian eyes, small lips, small nose, black boob-length hair, short |
| Lucymllr chapter 20 . 1/15/2015 Sorry I haven't been reviewing! But Im kinda glad so I didnt have to wait to find out what happens! And I'm excited for the next chapter and story! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/14/2015 UPDATE PLEASE! |
| MentalityWriter13 chapter 19 . 1/13/2015 What?! Is Chris being kidnapped? |
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/13/2015 UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I NEED TO KNW WHO THE ATTACKER IS! AND WHAT HAPPENED TO ZEKE AND SHAUNA AND WHAT HAPPENED TO CHRISTNA, AND CHANEL AND ERIC! AND I THINK JEANINE PUT TRIS AND TOBIAS IN THE SIM! BUT I NEED TO KNW FOR SURE! BUT IT SAID IT WAS A MUSCULSR VOICE SO I THINK ITS A MAN BUT I DKNT KNW! AHHHH THIS IS SOOOOOO FRUSTRATING! |
| First Runner chapter 19 . 1/12/2015 Dammit Libby. Damn you. Damn you all, initiates. |
