| Reviews for A Grain of Sand |
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ALSTROEMERIA chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 Awesome story...please update soon! |
Shetan20 chapter 2 . 2/20/2019 Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter. |
Shetan20 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019 Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter. |
akinomatis chapter 13 . 12/3/2018 Hope you will be updating this story soon, loved it. |
Milolilo chapter 13 . 11/28/2018 I adore this fic. You have a huge imagination and are not afraid to explore the world and possibilities. You also have a very nice way of writing. I like the dialogues, you describes what happens very well and nothing feels forced. I was disliking Ralec at first but then I started rooting for him, he seems adorable. His heart is going to break and he’ll be so confused why harry all of a sudden is with Thorin. You better come up with a good explanation, Harry! I hope you’ll explore a little bit more about what the dwarfs intentions towards Harry are. Like are they only nice to him because of his status? I know some are, but are all of them? I want to know! Right now Harry probably thinks Thorin only agreed to marry him because he owned him, but something tells me Thorin is a little bit in love... but on the other hand the whole fucking Erebore seems to be in love with him.. eh. Has Thorin kept following him around in his disguise? What has Thorin been discussing with Dwalin, Bali’s and Nori? They all agreed that marriage was the only way out REALLY fast so I can’t help but wonder if it’s been discussed. I felt like something went flying over our heads in the last conversation. Harry’s dwarfparents are idiots. And that poor redhead neighbor. I kind of hope Harry can do something to help him feel better, the poor guy. Bad Harry. Bad. Maybe there is some I’m-sorry-I-shamed-you-in-front-of-the-whole-neighbourhood gift he can give? The socks were hilarious. If you ever continues with the story, I’m looking forward to lots and lots of unintentional oblivious teasing from Harry’s side. Like walking around barefoot in their quarters. (I always walk barefoot in my own home) Asking Thorin to braid his hair since Harry fucking sucks at it (he isn’t combing it, just braiding.. so it should be okay, right? Lol) or get permission from Thorin to braid his hair (I never learned, can you teach me? Can I practice on your hair?). GIFTS, Anyway, |
Child of Dreams chapter 4 . 11/23/2018 2791? And the Dwarves are still in Erebor? But what about Smaug's attack in 2770? |
Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 11/23/2018 Red eyes? I've got a bad feeling... |
Guest chapter 13 . 11/17/2018 oh my goodness, i love this book so much, your doing such a good job! i literally could not stop reading. |
AnimeIceFox chapter 13 . 9/5/2018 This turned out way better than I thought it would! This story is amazing. I didn't really like the idea of Harry being a dwarf, having always read elf Harry or Human Harry stories, but you have converted me to the light! I love all the awkward interactions Harry had with Thorin and I loved all the dwarf traditions that were coming up. I also really enjoyed that this story wasn't a sort of soulmate story or a love at first glance now we go bang sort of thing. All of Harry's relationships felt genuine. I was even really rooting for Ralec! And I loved that little bit with the boy, asking Harry to marry him! And Jakar and that whole marriage plot, I did not even consider that being possibility! Everything! I loved everything! Thank you for writing this, I hope you come back to finish this when you have time. |
Bye bye fanfictio.net chapter 13 . 8/11/2018 I love this story I hope you update soon or let someone adopt it because this is awesome! |
BlueRedemption chapter 13 . 7/18/2018 I was completely enraptured! I haven’t read a Thorin/Harry pairing before - certainly unusual. But wowza - this story is just a work of art. I love the whole socks, comb and strange dwarf customs they have going on. So funny! Super sad to note that you haven’t updated in years. Mayhap someday you’ll feel the need to continue? Until then, I’ll add this to my fave and follow list! |
redhouseclan chapter 13 . 5/22/2018 Noooo! Ralec was cool and Thorin is obvs handsome but a stranger tho! Omg |
redhouseclan chapter 9 . 5/22/2018 I need to knw what those socks mean! Lol |
redhouseclan chapter 5 . 5/22/2018 Awesome! Ralec seems so cool and handsome! |
bakezorishoes chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 I love you. |