I really hope you finish this story

heheh, I know that feeling. But I trust that you won't just abandon this story. I'll enjoy reading it till the end.
Great job on this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the time-skip!

I'm happy, I'm glad, this story didn't turn into something so crazily unreal, it is more realistic and it doesn't romanticize Stockholm syndrome! This kept me riveted and I can't wait to see the end of this tale and I do hope it is happy and that we get to see some reciprocated lovey dovey times between them in the future or something like that where Law forgives overtime since they had both been hurt by the experience. Maybe not even love, but something to a sexual tension that breaks suddenly into what is the first time they love in years...that would be interesting as ideas, but I will be happy with whatever ending you choose...I am ready whenever you are willing to Grace us with it.

Hi!
I really like the story. I hope you'll finish it. Good luck with writing!

I like the way Corazon is trying to protect Law and the twisted relation with his bronzer. I also love seeing the evolution between Law and Kid. I'm looking forward next chapters :)

Well, I don't know about anyone else, but I'm rivited to this story! I would hate to see it end in a way that cheapens it. I really hope that the ending will make sense, even if Law ends up with Stockholm Syndrome or something. It kind of looks like that's what Law is developing, despite his harsh treatment.

Even if no one else is reading this, I want you to know that I am, okay? Keep up the great work! (I hope that you DO end up posting this on AO3, btw!)

Great writing!

Ryuichi

Whoa...Kid's gonna try and sacrifice himself (one way or the other) for Law? I didn't think he had that in him, since he was so selfish in previous chapters.

I can't wait to find out what'll happen next!

Ryuichi

update please...

I'm glad that you are going to finish this story, but I have to admit that I see some kind of craziness happening at Ace's trial! (a "trail" is another word for "path")

I almost feel sorry for Kid, he "dun fucked up royally" from Day One with Law! And then, choking him whenever he panics? WTF is up with that? Killer's right. Kid is an idiot. Lol

I'm loving this story and I'm eagerly waiting to find out what will happen next!

Great job!

Ryuichi

Yannow, sometimes your A/Ns about what headspace you're in at the end of the chapters are pretty freakin' interesting. (_~)

Great writing, btw!

Ryuichi

Wow, was this chapter HAWT! Even with the phone call and knifeplay. *snerk*

I almost feel sorry for Kid. Does he even relise that he's basically fallen HARD for Law? Well, I would guess that Kid's not the sharpest crayon in the box, ne? (_~)

Intriging writing!

Ryuichi

Good for you, Law, for finally fighting back!

Poor Cora, he had to faint for Dumb Doffy to realise he was working his injured brother too much!

Great job, yo!

Ryuichi

Ch 15 review, continued

Oh, and it looks like I was wrong about the "brother complex." Doffy is one sick MFer! Poor Corazon!

I'm glad that Law can't remember what happened when he was 15. But it looks like those memories are being triggered by Kid. Poor Law!

Ch16

It seems that Kid is finally realising what he was doing to Law is wrong. I suppose better late than never. : /

Ryuichi

Its cool to finally meet Ace in the story! I wonder what happened that he was in the wrong place at the wrong time...twice it seems.

Wonderful story!

Ryuichi

Oh man, I am SO iensnared/i with this story! (See what I did there? XD ) I got so caught up in it I forgot to say anything at the end of the chapters like I usually do. Sorry, not sorry. ; 3

Great writing!

Ryuichi