The idea for the story is Good but Narutos Character is all over the place, he hates his family, but in the next ch. He jokes with them, he is OK with being hit on the head by his mother and so on. This all makes for a realy confusing Mc.

FUCKIN CK

bruh learn to fucking spell, jesus fucking christ. Like, what the FUCK is a kyubia bro. Come hunt be down, bitch, because if your navigational skills are ANYTHING like your spelling, you'd get lost in your own fucking house before you got out the door lmao

Judging by the reviews, I thinks it's safe to say that I ain't reading this crap.

The quotations around their names is really messing with me but other wise good story

Why did Anko still have her seal after it was removed in chapter 3?

Okay, how the Hell does someone's writing go from bad to WORSE?! About 99.9% of people's writing IMPROVES when they write more, but your's has gotten worse!

Now instead of using quotation marks...

That's these marks "...

Around the dialogue so people can separate a character's words from those of the story, you're using the marks to surround the speaker, making your already poorly written story even HARDER to comprehend.

fix your fucking grammar

You should get beta bro... I love concept but grammar and sentence arghhhh...

And to think, this is one of the most popular fics of this particular category...
It's almost frightening, thinking about the serious clout one can get from the Naruto name, regardless of actual quality.

is this story over yet ?!

Just no.

First off in the first paragraph the girls are Minato's "daughter's " NOT his sisters.

Second:

Huh? Where the heck am I" said Naruto to no one in particular.

"That would be me," said the same voice only this time bigger and closer.

he asked where he is, NOT who is it.

As I kept reading I just couldn't continue. I loathe the stupidity of the neglect fics as it is and this is just bad.

I am curious if saying Kyubia instead if Kyubi has been intentional though but I'm not continuing just to see.

Perfect and update soon please

You know I enjoy this story but your language when you put down your readers for their opinions makes you garbage.

Why is she surprised he has a summon he said he has multiple and she has seen the fox he summoned? The fic is interesting but the grammar, sentence structure, and consistency could use some work.