When’s the next chapter?

I hope they go to the pridelands and team up with Simba and his friends and face off against Scar next.

Oh Aqua that's a little late for that date as zack hit the bucket

Nice story. Keep going. Love the chapter.

Good chapter.

Ah Under the Sea at last.

This chapter was very cool, but how come there's no journal entry for the Heffalumps and Woozles?

This story is pretty neat, however, Piglet is not a sow, since a sow is a female pig, and piglet is male.

Is sora secretly a saiyan, noticed story image that's why, also good reading.

So this is not your story as far as I can tell you copy pasted kh1, if it dose get different it has to be past chap 6 evrything before that is what happens in kh1 you are just an unoriginal peas of trash

Yay for more original Disney references! :D

So, this Maleficent is based on the Angelina Jolie version, since you mentioned the Evermoors?

So, Aqua's not trying to help Terra come back to the light in this one...Hmm...And wonder where Ven is in this.

And another bit of a typo. "Aerieth" is spelled "Aerith", with only one "e". But overall, a nice take on the first game.

Oh, so a lot of this is based on the original concept of Kingdom Hearts. Okay. I was wondering why Rikku was there instead of Yuffie.

Also, there's a bit of a typo:

"Aqua answered, as she guided Dora out of the alleyway."

I think you meant to put an S there instead of a D. And you don't really need the comma next to answered, since you have another comma later in the sentence.

Oh, so in this, everyone knows about Xehanort but chalk him up to more of an urban myth.