Great story. Wish annabeth didn't die. Keep writing.

Dude I saw this story on wattpad and it's a shock to find it here as well but great work

I know you said historical inaccuracies, but plz make a decision to commit to history or not. Like you’re using a bunch of proper Latin, but then you want Percy to fight in gladiatorial games? Gladiators were as low as prostitutes in Rome

Hey so I know these are semantics, but in Roman custom, Percy would have given her a ring, and then after the cernemony they would have parades through the streets until they got to Percy’s house and then he would carry her over the doorstop to stop any bad omens.

Thanks for giving us an ending and showing us some of your writing process. This is one of the largest PJ fics I've read so kudos to the six years you spent on this. I enjoyed the quotes at the beginning of each chapter.

Hmm the men aren't supposed to be beautiful line is from Mortal Instruments isn't it? I'm not entirely sure about the source but I remember the next line is "it would be like calling a girl handsome".

Lol Brad Pitt's Achilles speech to Rose Bryne's Briseis from the movie Troy is epic but I'm not sure the beautiful part is as applicable because Zoe ain't trying to romance Percy lol.

I see the lines from Rihanna's "Stay" in Annabeth's love pledge there.

I love this story, it's written in such a unique way. I think you've done a really good job here, although I was wondering. Annabeth said he got 25 lashes, but this chapter said he got sixty or seventy.

I am really confused with chapter 55. There are repeated scenes and Reyna has appeared? They see Octavius on a regular basis? And they suddenly have soldiers? I am not sure what's going on

Something went wrong here. Suddenly Reyna is there? And the part about Annabeth and Percy searching for that girl was also in chapter 54, in the middle. Really confusing.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Keep this story going! I need to know what happens next, if Annabeth lives or dies, if Percy and Annabeth have a child. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

Please please PLEASE! Finish this story. I need to know what happens next! PPPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEE!

i love love lovee the ending of this chap. yeahh annabeth fricking LIONESS COME ONN. yah but seriously what u hv done is amazing i mean the plot is to DIE for , soo good, honestly
but i hv to ask.. WHERE did reyna come from? and the war? is it gonna be explained and this is just some of the key moments which are gonna be keeping our minds racing?
anyways GOOD JOB
i highly doubt that i would have been able to do what u hv done here

I don't care what people may think, but you are an amazing writer! Keep on posting new chapters because I can't wait to see what happens next.