Love the story! Plz update soon I can't wait!
-K

Please submit the next chapter soon! I love this story! I have always wondered what would happen if a fight got really bad between Raph and Leo and Raph decides not to come back like he always does.

Sorry for the late!
I really liked this chapter but I prefered the previous. Don't ask me why, cause I don't know ' it was more... Intense.

But don't worry, I love you story. It is different from the others and it contains all I want to read between Leo and Raph.

Congrats I can't wait for reading the next one ;)
Hiveen

Good stuff, girl! Love the line about Raphael using the fine line as his personal jump rope! Sweet!
In the movies, comics and cartoons, it's always taken a major rumble with somebody getting seriously whacked to bring the guys back together. Would like to see you come up with a fresh way to make it happen. A new discovery/artifact that brings them together? A joint need - Mikey gets lost? [Because, like, who could not come together to help Michelangelo, right?] They run into each other on a night patrol and compete to a draw and finally talk it out? I've no doubt that you'll find the right avenue!

I'm actually really happy and excited that we get to see this from Leo's perspective, too.
Leo seems kind of bitter, for lack of a better word. He's hurting, like Raphael is, even if in a different way. He's scared, Raph pushes back against everything, but Leo needs to keep everyone safe. As said, that fear can come out as anger, which doesn't really help in dealing with Raph, but at least it might help release it some. Or not. Leo needs control, needs Raph to listen to him so that he can keep anything bad from happening to him, but I think the anger and hurt kind of cloud that up, and he goes from 'I'm right' (which Raph probably wouldn't appreciate anyway) to 'you're wrong'. Subtle but big difference, and Leo might not even realize it so much. I'm thinking Raph might be being more honest with himself as to why he feels hurt here, than Leo is.
And the ground seems a bit uneven, as it seems Raphael can easily tell what Leo is thinking while Leo doesn't have the first clue about Raph. Which might cause more unhappy feelings, and add to the whole thing.
That last line. I confess, I had to read it twice before I understood it. It might not be clear the first time, but that could very well make it better. This is from Leo's point of view, and his feelings might not have been the clearest at the moment, after all. And it's not saying that Raphael straight up left, or he's straight out not coming back. He 'ran out' of 'him coming back'. He's done it so many times before, but this time he might not be able to bring himself to. Raph himself might see it as almost a kind of strength, staying away even though it would hurt him, because he thinks it best for his family. Leo, maybe not so much? I don't know, they're both tired and weary here, from all of it.
And I gotta apologize, because I can't use words, and didn't say what I wanted to say, and lost what I wanted to say half way. But author knows best, I trust your ideas and writing, and I'm sure this story will turn out awesome. Keep it up!

So far so good. I love the indept look into Leo's mind. I kind of hate the fact that it's a bit of a filler and was hoping for more progress, but it's a needed chapter. So I am good. Next chapter soon and please, and as for how this should go?

Let's see poison?

Infection?

That cut is significant somehow, and I can't wait to find out how.

Oh man. Your writing makes me so emotional. Raph and Leo are my favorites, and I feel you really do them justice. I really do hope you will feel like continuing this story. You said that perhaps a lot of it will be in Raph's point of view, does that leave room for a glimpse from Leo's, too? Or maybe Raph knows him well enough to not even need it.

Just...I love your work 3

Continua por favor :3

Please, please, please continue! It really
good!3

Whoa. There's a lot of anger in there. Well written and totally one-sided to Raphael's POV. I'd like to see this relationship redeemed. Would be interesting to see where you take it.

please contiue

Please please PLEEEEEEEEEASEEEE continue!

I Love this story please continue! Thanks, Cat girl

CONTINUE PLEASE I LIKE THIS STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE

Plweese continue this...I mean it's awesome. The entire set up is perfect, and I love how it's from Raph's POV. The idea that for once, he just get tired of always being the one seen as the problem is beautiful, and his reaction ...is the complete opposite. Which is odd enough, but the fact that no one seems to notices that ...because they don't want to get involved in the normal fight. I love this, and I am even more curious as to what is wrong with him. So great ...So great ...So great...I can't wait for the next chapter, so please. Quickly ...if at all possible.