So I just want to know, when they became the sannins apprentice’s they were 8? Since you said it was just after the massacre. And this last chapter ends at them barely turning 12? Also since you said it was just after team Gai graduated and the Rookie Nine haven’t yet does this mean it’ll still be a few months for the Chunnin exam to start so the Rookie Nine get experience with missions and the sort and it’ll be when they turn 13? Or at least when Sakura is 13 cuz in canon Sakura was 13 when she took the exams. Or we’ll they start the Chunnin exams right after the Rookie Nine graduate? Also since it’s been more than 3 years has Sakura gotten the 100 healings mark or has she not started to develop it yet? Anyways I really like this story I hope u update someday soon!

Can't wait to see how this story ends

I can't wait to see how this story ends

Please update soon

Please sir may we have some more?

So Naruto's not going to learn the Rasengan? One of his most iconic justu? And Sasuke is going to learn it instead? And he also has Chidori? That highly seems unfair cause the Rasengan is technically like a family heirloom. Minato invented it so I think it's unfair if Naruto doesn't get to learn it. And it looks like like Sasuke is too OP, with the Chidori and Rasengan in his arsenal. Plus, how did Sasuke even learn Chidori? That is originally Kakashi's justu and he doesn't have any influence with Sasuke in the story, so it is highly unlikely for Sasuke to learn Chidori. And its a bit sad that you took away Naruto's Rasengan from him, I was quite disappointed that this story makes it look like Naruto is a minor character and Sasuke is the main one. It's just my opinion anyway.

I just can't get past a few points. If Jiraiya was more present within the village, then I believe he would have had a more personal relationship with Naruto. I can't read a story where Jiraiya teaches anyone other than Naruto the Rasengan. Only two people know it, Kakashi and Jiraiya, and that is because they were both extremely close to Minato. Jiraiya teaching Sasuke the Rasengan feels too wrong for me to continue reading this story. Good luck if you ever come back to this story.

Man this is such a great story i really hope you will update soon!

that was good keep the chapters coming

I love the concept for this story. This is a very refreshingly original idea. Can't wait to read the rest.

I really like this story, can't wait for an update

Quick question, my friend. When are you uploading again? For I truly like this story, so I kinda want to see it finished.

Update soon...

This story so far is bery good in my opinion. I like the switching of Sasuke and Naruto and their respective canon sensies. Keep it up i look forward to the next chapter.

O naruto não vai aprender o jutso que é o legado do seu pai? Que tosco