Chapter 5 is so god damn awful and doesn't make since because if Natsu joined the guild at 14 years old and had dragon force and dragon king slayer magic, why was he only s-class for a year. Also beats gildarts during his trials because he got over his fear, what bullshit is this.

I want moooorrreeee... its good

i absolutely love the Ugin reference. Huge Mtg player and it made me super happy to see that. great story btw

Honestly... When I clicked on this fanfic... I didn't notice the rating until you said so in your author notes, but honestly I'm basically in it for my favorite Fairy Tail pairing NaZa... I like Natsu, but I LOVE Erza. I've trued readibg fanfics of her in different pairings, but honestly I couldn't get into them as much as I do NaZa or Erza in a lesbian situation with people like Mirajane or Cana. I love plots anyway. So I have no problems what so ever with this being rated T. If I want something of the sexual variety then I will look elsewhere, but as I said earlier... Plots are a good thing to have.

What's the ring look like

Welcome back to fanfiction, hope you two had a great time. Great chapter, I do hope natsu does the pandemonium (not sure how to spell). I always wondered how it would have went. Also, if erza does gakes mira's scene natsu's reaction is going to be hilarious.

For the first chapter it looks really good

does anyone else hate the new fixes to app

This was an amazing chapter and Natsu going ballistic and him absolutely fucking up that cuck Ivan for hurting Wendy was one of your best writing parts yet

Great chapter i loved the fight against Jura and Natsu ramapaging against Ivan

hey as I am reading your story which I like I noticed that in the first chapter you said Natsu had 3 fire and 2 earth dragon slaying magics but so far he has only used 1 of each are we going to see him use them soon?

Hasn't anyone ever told you that when you switch speakers iin the dialogue you are supposed to start a new paragraph?

it feels rushed

Umum bas

Get control of yourself man this is put down the the controler and write the rest of this fanfic