Great story!

I’ve tried and failed to read this story so many times because I can never get past the line “she finished her medical degree at 22.”

Sure, you want your character to appear smart, but this just went too far. It telegraphs to me that the character HAD to be 24 for some reason, no doubt for self-insert/relatability by author or whoever the story is intended for. It would’ve been infinitely more reasonable and probably wouldn’t have hurt the story at all if the character was a little older.

For example, to become a doctor you have to go through undergrad, med school, and residency. Undergrad is 4 years; med school is 4 years, residency is at minimum 3. That’s 11 years. I suppose the undergrad could be completed in under that but the other two you literally can’t speed up, so what’s really being implied is that she started college at 11 and med school at 15 (pretty sure that wouldn’t be allowed). Even if it were, people of that level of IQ and the level of social isolation required to complete this insane timeline would have serious difficulties that wouldn’t be addressed in this story.

I understand that the premise was to make the character intelligent, but a simple google search would show what an utterly ludicrous timeline that would be. While this is fiction and some disbelief should be suspended, referencing real world things like that are really poignant for some readers like me because they give a real world guideline of how smart/successful a character is supposed to be. And this one just went way too far.

Wow... that was an amazing story.

im not sure how i felt about the absolute ending. cause i dont understand why zeus sent them back but yet they have no memory of the fact that they had a purpose. And its a little unsettling that Anna is a child now. Something is unsettling about him helping to raise her then be intimate...

I can have a purring and groping Marcus too?! Gimme gimme, please please please, my body is ready! XD

I looooved that

I adore the small hints of dominance. I love when authors write relationships like that even if it's just slightly hinted at. I'm in a sub/dom relationship so it just makes me giddy to read those small hints of it. so thank you

Uhhh this story was sooooo wonderful. I had to force myself to put my phone down just to savor this story a little longer or I’d read it in all one sitting!

Wow, that was beautiful and I loved it!

great chapter :)))

great chapter

Awesome chapter :)))

great chapter :))

:))))

Interesting