this fic has a rreally good story line and is really well written - thank you xx :)

Aww, such a love way to end! I love how you incorporated their past into this chapter a bit and I really love your writing, you portrayed so many emotions perfectly! x

Thanks for writing such an amazing fan fiction
Enjoyed reading it

Amazing ! You know as I guess you are going off the winter preview trailer of cal lofty and max going out drunk and then cal on the floor I actually think there is going to be a spiking story line on casualty that will be similar to this ! Can't wait to read chapter 5 :) well done xx

This fic was perfect ;-; SO MANY TEARS

CONTINUE THIS PLEASE!

Liked this. Poor Cal.

I liked the ending. I'm glad he confided in Ethan even though he didn't come right out and say it, his brother knew and was ready to support him in whatever he decided to do. I think you did a great job.
Have you seen the promo for the next episode - looks like trouble with either football fans or a March or something and although I'm sure nothing will happen to our favourite twosome maybe there's an idea for a story? Marauding fans terrorising the emergency department? Hmm. Anyway great job and I look forward to more x

This story is getting more and more intriguing with all these twists. I loved Cal's reaction in this chapter it seemed so realistic! If you want ideas, how about one of them getting sick and then the other catching it too (your choice which way round and what illness. Anyway this is beautifully written, your writing is amazing! x

It was really good, please continue as there aren't many story's about cal and Ethan getting injured/hurt/sick etc. if you want anymore ideas I'd go with cal and Ethan getting injured/hurt/sick. But this story is so good I want to know what happens

Another solid chapter. I hope Cal manages to open up very soon and I hope he opens up to his brother because we all know that Ethan will be there for him! Looking forward to more x

Update soon please and if you do struggle pm me and i could help you if you would like

Please continue this. I am really enjoying it. There aren't many Cal and Ethan fanfics so please continue

Continue this please, I love this fanfic! I would like to read about police interviews and also just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing casualty fanfic writer and should continue stories about Cal and Ethan x I can tell you that they would be so good even though they don't exist yet and I haven't read them :))))

I love seeing a vulnerable side to Cal in this story. Also great use of drama, this is a brilliant chapter (so was chapter 5) and I think you're writing the subject really well. I'm looking forward to more! x