I know this was from 2015 or something, but i was (still am) a big fan of his- Shawn Mendes (adore that song btw), and I'll just say that i'm glad to be one of his earlier fans - v gr8 and spicyy story so far!

This was my shit tbh you made me cry keep up the good work

I've been playing The Game non-stop for about three years now... and I hadn't lost it since July. so before I even knew which "The Game" you were referencing, I lost it.

Ummm, that kind of kills the sexual mood though. Hey, we're having sex, wait a second! Eat this biscuit, EAT IT NOW!

As someone who struggles with anorexia, and I'm not trying to say this in a mean way, you can't just "stop eating" all of a sudden. Anorexia is a slow descent into hell and depression, and I would suggest doing more to illustrate that in the future if you ever write about eating disorders again. Good fic otherwise!

I've got to say, this was an amazing story. So well written, I don't know how you can't see that. Dan and Phil's relationship after Phil found out about Dan's condition and he was really, fully aware, 100%, it seemed like the atmosphere changed around them, like Phil was the only one who could help him. Louise was right, the best people get the best endings 3 3

OMFG I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Oh shit! No, really, Dan shouldn't be a model. He's hot and all, but he shouldn't be a model. Not good for him

This is such a great story. I love it and I can't wait to read more if you write some more. You are a great writer and you have a lot of talent. I could really relate to this story and your writing was so nice. It would be great if there was more to this story. I wish I could have read this earlier but I only found this story yesterday. This is a great piece of writing and I hope there will be more.

Ooh smutty smutty stuff going on I see ;)

that will definitely make him want to eat ;) hee hee!

I like this. This is interesting. Also, I seem to have read it all in 2 hours, which honestly isn't saying much for me, but that's probably because I spent at least a half-hour dancing around, trying to figure out how to dance around, and getting major dysphoria. Oh, and Fall Out Boy! Where was I going with this? Oh, yeah, this is a really good story, read it in 1 1/2 hours, excited to read more.

i really love your style of writing! english is my first language and i'm sure you're better than me hah. i love this story so much and i kinda relate to it a lot and it makes me really :) knowing im not alone (wow this is deep af but in a good happy way ok) thank u so much for writing this :)

smut yes pls omg i love ur writing

Wow, this is a really great story! :) And just do whatever you are most comfortable with. If you feel like giving a try, go for it!