Such a sweet and very interesting fic. I love Jack/ Danny bonding fics as they're so rare

Happy writings

Awww! So sweet! Also, thank you for getting that song in my head ; )

very nice. good job.

This was oh so cute, these archives need more father son bonding, everything was written nicely and it held a great pace all along; lovely piece of writting indeed!

He has dyslexia...all he needs is ADHD and hes a demigod! :D
...sry...im obsessed with percy jackson 2...hehe... :D DPout

This was actually really cute. Well done, pulling this idea together.

This made my morning. I know you were writing last night, and I know you said…last week(?) that you were close to finishing, but I NEVER EXPECTED I WOULD WAKE UP TO THIS.

You can imagine my excitement. xD And yooooooou. You are wonderful, and this exceeded all expectations.

What I adored so much about it was Jack admitting to Danny that he went through similar things. But no, it wasn't even that. Parents say that all the time. Jack admits that /his/ parents didn't understand. Jack, however, went into detail and actually /shared/ what it was he went through. That's special because that's what gets Danny to open up, and it is beautiful. I love them. You definitely took my "Danny-Jack bonding" prompt and rocked it. I was so happy to see that, in the end, the experience drew them closer. Imagining them playing video games together makes me want to hug a pillow and squeal. It's fics like this one that remind me of how…neglectful Maddie and Jack kinda were in the show. Thank you for setting it right. :D

I also like the personal headcanons you threw in there. Especially his over-stimulated senses while he's in ghost form. That's brilliant.

Lovely ending, too. It ended on an optimistic note, which definitely off-set the feeling of shame and disappointment in the beginning. Very nicely done.

Yes, I love you. Thank you so much for this lovely oneshot! :D :D *TACKLE HUGS*

This was an interesting story and you brought out some very good points. It seems that on TV when someone gets thrown around they just sort of shake themselves off and everything is fine. Considering what Danny has been through and all the times he gets bashed and smashed, there would probably be some repercussions.

This might be interesting it it was expanded to show more of Danny first realizing that he had a problem and then going through the process of finding ways to deal with it. His feelings of frustration and being teased and harassed for being different were mentioned but expanding the story out would bring out the point even better. I also like Jack's warm and loving support.

Ok, wow in sure wasn't expecting a disability out of the ghost-half.

Yes dyslexia is not fun but it treatable, that's the important thing.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.