Great job with this chapter

semoga anda cepat mati

The blatant anachronisms have really killed my ability to even pretend to enjoy this tripe. I am done.

You should never write anything again in your life.

This trash is hilarious.

From Erza randomly deciding to make an issue out of not believing in ninjas, things continued escalating with her uncharacteristically being a hugely arrogant bitch. Then they started a ridiculous fight that kept escalating until it was basically a life-or-death battle from Erza's perspective.

All over a simple little disagreement. And we're expected to believe that she and Naruto end up romantically involved. Hilarious. Truly.

The writing is also extremely bad. I assume you wrote this when you were a child. You used to word "awesome" way more than any sane adult would. Multiple times in a single sentences. Like 3-4 times in one paragraph.

Realistically speaking, Naruto's fight with Erza got so out of hand that the guild leader would have stepped in long ago. Even if he didn't, the other guild members would have stepped in instead of watching one of their key members getting her ass handed to her by a random stranger only a few of them know. And by "know" I mean "met once years ago".

"Okay, I beat the ever-loving shit out of this girl. Over a baby argument. Then I nearly tortured her in front of all of her friends and guild mates. I'm just going to casually grab her and carry her into the guild and no one is going to react. Cool. Don't forget how awesome my awesome muscles are under my awesome shirt that was totally awesome but not as awesome as my rockin' bod that's definitely awesome."

This is almost comically bad. Almost. But it's just SO bad that it being funny doesn't save it. It's clearly not intended to be funny. It's just shit.

There's no point in leaving reviews for abandoned trash, but fuck if this chapter isn't full of dumb shit.

"Uhhhh durrrr there's no such thing as cities"

Naruto lived in a large village that was basically a small city. It's meant to be "hidden" so the size of it must be controlled. The normal civilians absolutely have cities and Naruto has even been to at least a couple of them.

I mean, I shouldn't be surprised at the low level of intelligence displayed here. You can't even spell the word "listen" correctly. I think I'm just disappointed by the sheer lack of even a single tolerable Naruto/FT story. It seems like no one who writes anything to do with Fairy Tail is capable of writing coherently, let alone anything resembling competently.

i am sorry i tried to power through this but this is just too much . you had a good thing going the first two chapters but completely ruined it afterwards with how naruto and erza were behaving , hell even the guild members were so out of character . and this chapter dialogues had me cringing so much . and how come naruto stayed in Fiore for two years yet never heard of a guild ?
anyway sorry dont mean to flame just had so much expectation of this especially since i absolutely love godlike MCs , so was really disappointed .

That was totally OC Naruto ...his character changed a lot in one chapter that's weird ..it like ur making him orichamaru

Garbage writer, terrible grammar, terrible plot, andoverall trash

Can't wait for the next update

Sorry I but I had high hopes for this story. But it is a disappointment. There are way too many things u are missing and the pace is waay to fast and ur show of emotions is completely crap. Tho I am still gonna try to read a bit more

Looking forward to reading more of the story

please continue

Well, that was different and Jose really is in for a world of pain stupid move. Shame it's not been updated in a few years

Well, that was pretty cool love the whole banter with superhero's but Batman is superior to everyone enough said Naruto/Erza is so cute I wonder what will happen though should be interesting plus with Naruto there Phantom Lord will get their asses kicked. I doubt any of the Elemental 4 could stand up to Naruto if he can beat Madara, Obito and Kaguya they would be flies on the windscreen.

Well, that was amusing always loves stuff like body swaps in programs lol.