It's storys like this that make me want to go do something in life, it's storys like these that make me pray every night for those in pain and sorrow. You made a beautiful story about the emotions someone could feel losing a loved one with cancer, or without. People go throught this pain everyday, and you can't help but feel pity, you can't help but feel sorry... You caught Sonic's emotions perfectly, it was easy for me to contrast and compare with other different reactions, it was easy to understand how he felt, it was wasy to get lost in thought with that last sentence he said. You are an amazing author, keep on working hard, and see where the future takes you... See ya later!
P.S- I have an account on Fanfiction called Bloom Rossetta, so if you send a PM I could talk to you about how awesome you are! Thanks! -

THAT'S SO SSSSSAAAAAADDDDD! :,'(

Wow... that was very good! I really liked it. You were able to convey a lot of emotion in only a thousand words. nice work.

I really like it.

That was really sad... I feel bad for him. Anyway, this was really great! I love it! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That's so sad!
*starts crying
G-good job t-though! *sniffle

I loved this but it was so saaaaad. My god.

That was so sad and bittersweet. My heart goes out to Sonic.

please continue on writing chained souls!

Oh so sad :'(. Poor Sonic that Amy isn't there to him. Great job!

Wow...THAT WAS SO SAD! But really awesome :D! That's just sad though...poor sonic! :( GOOD JOB THOUGH! XD in like happy and sad at the same time