yeah

nice

great story

Please make a sequel! I would love to read about there life after this. Their music, if they start a family, what their life's are like after they got married. Please consider making a sequel!

I liked that Jade and her father are on good terms, indeed it will take a while for everything to be ok between them fully but if he walked down the aisle them yup, they'll all be a happy family.

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I should say though. If Tori was dead when the ambulance got to her, Jade would be the first suspect. Then Ryder.

Whoa little confusing but nice story

interesting story

Heeeey, thanks for ripping my heart oyt?, setting it on fire, and pissing on the ashes. This is so great.

I hate you.

I love you though.

And this story

Just realized that was supposed to be the last chapter, my bad! It's a good ending spot, but either way, more chapters or even an epilogue would be awesome! :-)

Great story! I'm so glad they're both okay! Please keep updating :)

Aw, very sweet but I think you should add one chapter with the Jori wedding and maybe Jade's father trying to redeem himself to his daughter.

And I hope this time Ryder suffer a hell of a lot more in prison.

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Sweet ending, even if it shows the police didn't think when they sent someone to help move the Vega's. not that a second police officer would have helped, but hay, it would have made Ryders job that much harder. but Jade saved Tori, only got wounded, and everything's right in the world again. good way to end things.

this is a masterpiece of a jori story plz update soon

this is a masterpiece of a jori story plz update soon