It started out good but the ending was a little rushed. It least you gave us readers an ending.

You mean a dementor's kiss, don't you? I hope Draco doesn't do it and he doesn't get sent to prison.

All Draco has to do is find out where his father is and tell the Ministry.

I am glad Harry put Hermione in her place. It is not him that needs to grow up . It is her.

Oh Oh, both girls like Draco. That is not a good situation. Ginny should never have said yes to Harry now.

Draco must be awfully good looking . He kissed Ginny and she forgot all about making Harry jealous.
Hermione is no longer his enemy . Then the ex ghost Myrtle keeps flirting with him. Myrtle is probbly old enough to be his mother or grandmother.

So are Draco and Hermione going to start liking the people they are patenting to date?

Now Hermione is going to get jealous. I can't wait to read about the cat fight.

What is the difference? Draco is probably dating Pansy so that everyone won't know that he and Hermione love each other.

I guess what is going to happen next. Draco is going to get jealous and hex Dean.

Why is everyone so mad at Hermione for going with Draco? I thought at Ginny would be on her side, unless she likes Draco.
Ginny should just go with Harry. He's way popular and famous.

Why can you make Ron come around and be civil for once?

I think you have it all wrong. Lucius cares about his family name and he would want it to go on. He only has one kid. So he would kill Hermione instead of Draco.

I hope Hermine didn't lead Draco into the wrong room and Harry and Ron saw them.

The chapters are good but not long enough. Just as I begin reading they're over.