a great piece. The characters are not empty , the actions are more or less normal , the Diaolgi are good and in general the story is excellent (Though it is a little embarrassing to realize and recognize for 300 years ) . MANY THANKS FOR THIS WORK . TOTAL KIND ...

Write MORE Serafall x Naruto lewdness!
Also, I agree there are not enough Serafall x Naruto in general.. so sad.

This was so GREEEEAAAAAAAAAAT. I mean i would mind if this was a story like 100 000 words story. This is so perfect

Slurp.

It's awful. The author's narrative is completely cringeworthy and the "plot" is not better.

That was lovely.

man lets be honest you never had first hand experience with sex do you cause i sure as heck know no one slurps during sex im serious unless its done intentionally which is just silly

u can burn c4 u can shoot it and u can drop into lava and it would not go off it needs an electrical current to go off

A wonderful story I absolutely love it.

Well, knowing Serafalls personality in this story they've certainly had a LOT of sex.

Not to mention Naruto hadn't had sex in millions of years if ever.

So good. So very good. Satisfying ending, which is hard to come across.

Fuck boruto

I'm not sure if I want to finish reading this. Mostly because... Have you EVER kissed another human being? Cause, I've gotta say, I've NEVER met someone that SLURPS while making out...

man i really really like this story it was a great story line and to read it was a joy i think that is the best pairing i have read in a dxd /naruto mix story and i do hope you will write more chapters to come so thanks

Shame that this only 2 shots story, it would be funny seeing children grow i mean even if only one of the inherited Naruto's prank and Serafall childish nature,,,,, well true nightmare would be unleashed and with all 3 children potentially having power level close to someone like Great Red or Ophis from Azazel and Michael better get ready for true hell.