Stupendous story!

Perfect chapter, I love all the action and emotion at the end. Beautiful.

You've captured everyone's personalities very well.

ah! I Loved this one! I hope to keep seeing stories from youthank you for sharing

I enjoyed this very much. I love how this story combines the JC and PT relationships as well as the CT friendship.
I can't stop to think absolut an alternative ending one in which Voyager came a few days later...
Thank you very much for sharing!

Well written. Loved it.

Great story! I think you captured all the characters really well. Well done!

I've read this over and over. I thoroughly enjoyed it, the characterisations were spot on and love Ayala blocking Chakotay and Janeway's reunion from the others!

This was a really wonderful story. I throughly enjoyed it. You captured the characters so well, and I really enjoyed the exploration of the difficulties between B'Elanna and Janeways. Very nicely done.

such an interesting story! thanks a mil for sharing.

This is an awesome story! But now I'm dying to see what happens if they actually were pregnant. Could you please, please do one where Voyager got there too late?

This was tricky (and dare I say risky) subject matter to take on and you did a good job with it. I like the fact that although the main focus was on J and C, you explored the Janeway & Torres and Paris & Torres relationships at that point in the series. It really gave the story substance that can sometimes be difficult to observe in purely J/C stories. Well done : )

I very much enjoyed the rest of this story. Great idea for a story and the characterization is so spot on, never overdone. You write them perfectly. I loved the way she crawled into bed with him at the end, after hours of wrestling with it I'm sure, and said simply, "It's too late"

Loved this story, and it was a privilege to get to read it first! I love all your characterisations, they're always so accurate. Can't wait for the next idea you have :)

Great story, loved how the plot powered on. Nice ending. love Be'lanna and Janeway working together, I really like being able to read stuff every day thanks for posting so quickly. it suited the pace of the story. lovely ending.