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yuric09 chapter 15 . 7/6 Es muy buena historia pero falta una boda ... |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/25/2019 Honestly wow I was hooked since the first chapter. It was amazing. So glad I saw it as a recommendation on Tumblr. Yes I love Drarry! What I found unique about this is that Harry sought help following the war and the big three weren’t together at all in it. |
sandra09 chapter 15 . 7/5/2019 absolutely beautiful! |
EsS chapter 7 . 3/25/2019 Gloriously written! The intense build up is intoxicating. |
EsS chapter 6 . 3/19/2019 Another Gem! |
EsS chapter 5 . 3/19/2019 Brilliantly sensual chapter! Well done! |
Danu chapter 15 . 11/19/2018 This fic is absofuckinglutely AMAZING ! The way u wrote harrys feelings and damn man, for the life of me i have never ever read such sexual tension in a fic and i read atleast 5 fics a day (minimum). The way you have written the whole fic in total is just mind boggling, u thankyou profusely for what u have presented us,,,,,,, seriously its soooooooooo amazing |
IvanBeau chapter 11 . 6/18/2018 Damn Lucius. he's learned from his errors. I've seen hardcore criminals be humbled by their experiences in jail - not all some get worse actually - but some. They turn in a completely new leaf but people still have a hard time believing it's genuine. But I've seen it. Had a friend. So I can definitely see how Lucius after witnessing what he put his family through - after what Voldemort put him through, would be humbled and put in a position where he had to reassess everything he thought was true. I like this version of redeemed Lucius. It's an idea that should be more often evaluated and expressed in stories, rather than the typical one-sided ideal that bad people never reform. |
IvanBeau chapter 10 . 6/18/2018 Harry is an annoying little hippie in this lol But I like how it sheds light on how some people are far too opinionated when they have so little information or understanding of what the subject. As for some of the reviews I read that have an issue with mpreg. I mean it's not my cup of tea but I'm not going to try to back up a personal taste with an entire branch of science over the magical world of Harry bleeding Potter. But I do find it hilarious how these people, so concerned with their public school biology, don't care much about that biology (which is quite flexible and its code has yet to be deciphered but commonfolk think what they learn in their public schools or the internet is gospel, unbreakable truths) when it comes to things like Polyjuice, sobering charms, animagus, vampires and werewolves, and pretty much everything existent in this magical fictional world. All of it is a complete violation of the laws of biology but whatever its fiction right? Biology, btw, as I said is by no means a rigid law as new information is discovered every day. such as turning adult ovaries into testicles by silencing the SRY gene (genes are data and data is malleable), or the research taking place to biologically grow the materials to make cars. commonfolk were told about the y/x chromosomes and there they are stuck religiously, their minds stuck in that little box, without even knowing a quarter of how it all works or how closely interwoven with the laws of other sciences it is. so they don't have a problem believing your body can suddenly transform into another person's in a few seconds with a drink made up of plants and other nonsense, or that a human can shapeshift into another species of animal - and still retain their human intelligence at that! but they have a problem with mpreg..pfft. hilarious. I think it's more of a personal socio-political issue rather than their sense of realism. Want your fiction to stick to your public school version of rigid biology? Don't read Harry Potter, period. And while it's not my cup of personal tea, I'm not going to go "that's not realistic even if the dead can walk and you can alter genetics to last forever with a single bite to the jugular! I won't be reading this anymore!" Fucking morons. Great work so far. Keep it up. And you don't need to warn them about mpreg any more than you need to warn them about a vampire popping up and turning them into an immortal bloodsucking undead. |
IvanBeau chapter 5 . 6/18/2018 LMAO oh poor Harry. I'm only on ch5 but I had to express my sympathy for the poor bastard, fictional or not. Malfoy's got him wrapped around his little finger. You write sexual tension so well and being Harry and Draco the friction already there makes it even more delicious. |
SeaOfCheese chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Holy shit this was amazing beginning to end. 4 for you Glen Coco! |
Theamazingneve chapter 15 . 1/15/2018 Omgoodness this was just fantastic. I suck at reviews but I just need you to know you are amazing. |
eiralu chapter 1 . 1/9/2018 Brilliant. Refreshing. Sparkling. I loved every minute. Even Harry's depressionwhich was spot onwas enthralling. |
Guest chapter 15 . 12/20/2017 You wrote the first peron narrative really effectively! I love this story; the thought put into it is brilliant! |
MissMJS chapter 15 . 12/8/2017 Well, didn’t this one hit me right upside the head! X_X |