great story. i especially love that you included touya in the ability to see sai. altough i wonder how he does.
the way/reason you made sai disappear is really much more satisfying than the original one.
i just have to mention that Hikaru would have been unable to carry a go board made from stone because it weights more than 50kg.
cheers
Maya

This is such a fantastic story! I love seeing Shindo's and Touya's relationship grow and solidify. Poor Akira's mental break after seeing Sai was (I should be ashamed to say) hilarious! And Ogata nearly running him over! 0.0
LOL
Thank you so much for this epic rendition of Hikaru no Go
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Fantastic! Your writing style is exemplary. I loved every second reading this. You clearly expressed the emotions and story line. It was an interesting ride. Thank you so much for sharing this!

I really liked this fanfiction! It was such a refreshing take on the Hikaru no Go world.

The changes you made to cannon shifted the story in an interesting direction. Sassy Touya's inner-monologue was hilarious. And I was surprised whenever he was outraged on Hikaru's behalf.

But I think my favorite part of this story was how Hikaru and Touya's friendship developed. They had their ups and downs, but they each placed high importance on being friends with the other. That's not an easy thing to do, especially at eleven-years-old.

This is really good :) . I really like the how you developed it . The relationship between shindou and Akira is really fun as well and I laughed plenty of times while reading this.

Oh wow. I really like this story, it's pretty original - a different take on everything and I like Touya and Hikaru's friendship. The monopoly game was funny but the most hilarious part was that phone conversation with his father - and the advice and Ogata. That was perfect!

Just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed this story and that the telephone conversation between Akira and Touya Kouyo was pure genius.

Really good story. But the chapters in the middle of the text were not needed. Should have remove it. Enjoyable read.

this is great, and cute too,
so sai was the reason for shindou fainting
the style is good easy to read and you should keeping on writing more fanfics :-)

Good.

Lol. They're such great frienemies. I like ur version of the list of Sai. It feels like it had more of a closure than the original story. Thanks for the post.

This is just too funny and heartwarming!

I have warm smile on my face. You did great my friend ;D

Lol smiley face. Great story.

... One of the greatest HnG fics out there. Loved it.